Reviews for Mercenary For The Money
Rangerbabe21 chapter 3 . 7/6/2019
Nice way to end the story.
Rangerbabe21 chapter 1 . 7/6/2019
Wow Vulcan Rider, nice story. I'm really impressed!
Carol421 chapter 4 . 5/20/2019
Excellent story for your first try!
chicki'62 chapter 4 . 12/20/2018
great, insightful short
bravo!
chicki'62 chapter 1 . 12/20/2018
dayummmm girl,
the 1st chap is a doozy!
nailed it!
i applaud u
twinkiesnreads chapter 4 . 9/18/2018
loved it. you did a good job with this.
tanyaleigh chapter 4 . 8/25/2018
I think you are right. Joe could barley make himself apologize to Steph there is no way in this reality he would have do it to Ranger. I think the interplay between Ranger and Joe then Joe and his mom was very powerful and well done! Thanks for sharing!
Hillmorrr chapter 4 . 8/15/2018
A great story. You have a way to give your characters their own voice and personality. I especially liked Angie Morelli, and the background you gave her. Thanks for sharing!
She'sGotHighHopes chapter 4 . 6/22/2018
I love how Ranger was able to force Morelli to really take a look at his behavior and see just how bad he really treated Stephanie. And I'm proud of Morelli for not ignoring Ranger's words and instead, looking into himself and making a change. Fantastic story!
an00626 chapter 4 . 5/25/2018
That was great and BOY wouldn't I love some of my old tormentors to apologize. Would you think about maybe Helen also finally having epiphany. Think your muse has a great way of getting it out of them.
got2BaBabeFan chapter 4 . 5/22/2018
Great story. I think your writing of Joe was very good. I saw that in my family- perpetuating things & never realizing it.
Sunny Okanagan chapter 4 . 5/21/2018
Great story. Really well thought out and written. I love that joe doesn't just brush off what Ranger told him. Domestic abuse is a huge dirty topic and you handled it beautifully. Thank you for sharing
Guest chapter 4 . 5/21/2018
love this story
VVine chapter 4 . 5/5/2018
Not sure how I've missed this before but glad that I found it :) . Nice job!
daxandpat chapter 4 . 5/1/2018
Perfect way to end it. Really good job. Characters very real.
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