| Reviews for Mercenary For The Money |
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Rangerbabe21 chapter 3 . 7/6/2019 Nice way to end the story. |
Rangerbabe21 chapter 1 . 7/6/2019 Wow Vulcan Rider, nice story. I'm really impressed! |
Carol421 chapter 4 . 5/20/2019 Excellent story for your first try! |
chicki'62 chapter 4 . 12/20/2018 great, insightful short bravo! |
chicki'62 chapter 1 . 12/20/2018 dayummmm girl, the 1st chap is a doozy! nailed it! i applaud u |
twinkiesnreads chapter 4 . 9/18/2018 loved it. you did a good job with this. |
tanyaleigh chapter 4 . 8/25/2018 I think you are right. Joe could barley make himself apologize to Steph there is no way in this reality he would have do it to Ranger. I think the interplay between Ranger and Joe then Joe and his mom was very powerful and well done! Thanks for sharing! |
Hillmorrr chapter 4 . 8/15/2018 A great story. You have a way to give your characters their own voice and personality. I especially liked Angie Morelli, and the background you gave her. Thanks for sharing! |
She'sGotHighHopes chapter 4 . 6/22/2018 I love how Ranger was able to force Morelli to really take a look at his behavior and see just how bad he really treated Stephanie. And I'm proud of Morelli for not ignoring Ranger's words and instead, looking into himself and making a change. Fantastic story! |
an00626 chapter 4 . 5/25/2018 That was great and BOY wouldn't I love some of my old tormentors to apologize. Would you think about maybe Helen also finally having epiphany. Think your muse has a great way of getting it out of them. |
got2BaBabeFan chapter 4 . 5/22/2018 Great story. I think your writing of Joe was very good. I saw that in my family- perpetuating things & never realizing it. |
Sunny Okanagan chapter 4 . 5/21/2018 Great story. Really well thought out and written. I love that joe doesn't just brush off what Ranger told him. Domestic abuse is a huge dirty topic and you handled it beautifully. Thank you for sharing |
Guest chapter 4 . 5/21/2018 love this story |
VVine chapter 4 . 5/5/2018 Not sure how I've missed this before but glad that I found it :) . Nice job! |
daxandpat chapter 4 . 5/1/2018 Perfect way to end it. Really good job. Characters very real. |