That was soo cute! I loves it!

This is so gooood! Is there anymore chapters and if not you should definitely write more

Cool! I so Want that game!

I really liked this little story, and I think you should add a lot more chapters and make it a big thing, because it's a good idea, and is very well written

captain N the mega game mastericus?

This is so cuuuuute! I love how Palutena comforts Pit about fighting her, it's adorable. The ironic part is that Dark Pit actually DID end up getting in, haha.

Awwwww! Is that it? I would LOVE it if you'd continue this! It was very interesting, and I would read anymore chapters you wrote for this! :)