| Reviews for Rock, Paper, Scissors: A 01x02 Red Hair and Silver Tape Tag |
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Munkeyfump20 chapter 1 . 8/29/2016 I always wondered what would happen after the murderers was found. Thank you for the read |
xfmoon chapter 1 . 6/25/2014 Interesting tag. Kinda creepy when you go back to that epi now. |
CSI Mentalist Fan chapter 1 . 6/21/2014 What a great tag! Interesting conversation between Jane and McAllister, very eerie! |
Donnamour1969 chapter 1 . 6/13/2014 Wow. Thanks for this eerie exchange (in hindsight) between Jane and RJ. I wish we could have had this on the episode. Might have made "Red John" more believable (to me, anyway). Lovely, fulfilling tag. Looking forward to reading more of yours! |
Bella chapter 1 . 6/12/2014 Hey, they shook hands! Funny how the show seemed to have forgotten that they never did. |
Rosepeony chapter 1 . 6/12/2014 Hmmm ... interesting encounter. Wonder how much of it Jane would have remembered when searching the Palace for handshakers. |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/11/2014 Interesting. Loved the dialogue, very clever. It makes me wish we'd revisit the Red John matter in the "present" - hint! I feel like the show could wrap it up a little better, have Jane mention or talk about it one last time... With Lisbon. It's hard to believe everything went away when he died and I bet Jane stills has a few demons that visit him, not as often but still. After all, he is *scared*. I'm rambling, I'm sorry. I'm just looking forward to more fictions in the present from you, that's all. |
inkstainedfingers97 chapter 1 . 6/11/2014 Wonderful writing, as always. Loved Lisbon thinking about Jane's hand on her shoulder and her giving him a talking to about safety protocols. And the line where Jane promises not to add to her paperwork by inconveniently getting in the way of her bullet was pure gold. Enjoyed him flirting with her with the 'I love when you quote the CBI handbook at me' line. Also, good job making McAllister seem super creepy in hindsight in the last scene. ;) Thanks for writing! |
itsavolcano chapter 1 . 6/11/2014 Ooooooh, loved it. Kinda wished this had happened! |
Ca7lyTM chapter 1 . 6/11/2014 This was great- i especially loved how you included Mcallister- withoiht this tag I thought he wasnt clever enough etc to be red John but this added something :) Well, I hope u understood that. Its not really very good English XD Thanks! |
Ilovetea chapter 1 . 6/11/2014 Authentic tag and amazingly written - as always :-) I could imagine McAllister/RJ so well, he sounds like a nice guy who's a little odd but actually he's the creepiest man... You captured his character and the whole situation perfectly! |
Water-please chapter 1 . 6/11/2014 Brrrr. I have goosebumps! So creepy to see McAllister talk, and of course I'm trying to read between the lines. Great story! |
waterbaby134 chapter 1 . 6/11/2014 It's fun to read this first encounter between Jane and the man we now know as Red John. This was really well written and poignant. The line that got me most was McAllister saying it had been unforgettable to meet Jane. Hit me right in the guts thinking how much Jane had to endure to get himself into the same room with him again. Brilliant tag! |
Skeeziks chapter 1 . 6/10/2014 This is great! And more than a little creepy with this kind of hindsight, lol. Very clever how you wrote McAllister's sinister lines so in character x 2. And I love Lisbon wondering about Jane's lost potential - we've all been there wondering too. I don't read fanfic often but this is what I look for when I do. Love that you and others are doing the earlier season tags so we can see the relationship unfold from our new vantage point! Thanks for this. |
LouiseKurylo chapter 1 . 6/10/2014 Some interesting foreshadowing about McAllister's avocation eventually to be revealed. Hmm. Do like Lisbon's efforts to get Jane to perceive the world as she saw and lived it, as well as to understand the world he hid with such care and determination. Thanks. |