Really nice companion piece to a great episode. I like how you sowed the seeds for Jane retreating to his attic and have it such an elegant explanation.

Switching the 'dynamite act' from the widow to Lisbon was inspired.

Lovely story thanks

This is lovely. I really enjoyed the tension you highlighted between Jane and Lisbon so early on, and Jane's conscious efforts to keep his distance. Well done!

I really loved this. Lisbon was right, if Jane was going to get thrown off track by every pretty woman he encountered he would;t get much done. This was really fun to read and enjoyable. I look forward to seeing what you come up with next.

Excellent work! Really, really excellent! I loved reading this - the banter, Jane's wandering focus, his reluctance to acknowledge that Lisbon feels something for him (and the opposite) - you nailed it.

Really, really like this story

Well, this goes faster than I thought - the second tag for season one already! And a beautiful one! Their conversation was sweet, heartwarming and a bit angsty. Very believable!

Awesome tag! :)

Great tag! I love that you included his thoughts about finding the attic.

WOW... very well-written! Thanks for a wonderful tag.

I really enjoyed this. :D

-Shani :)

This just made my morning! Thank you so much for the dedication-I'm beyond flattered! :)

I love the banter between them in this piece! The part where Jane says RJ's name aloud in order to get himself to refocus on his revenge is exactly what I imagine he would be thinking at this stage.

Very well done!

I really enjoyed this tag - very well written and a wonderful way to explain Jane's taking up in the attic. The dialogue was crisp and in character. Thanks! (and Elvis makes his appearance!)

Very nice indeed.

I like how Jane's description of the widow was really a description of Lisbon.