I love how you made law and chopper the same person, and how zoro is kinda more, ya know, homicidal. anywho, can't wait fer the next chapter!

Mmm blueberries.., isn't it a common headcannon that Zoro likes blueberries? Iuno, I've just read a bunch of fics where Zoro enjoys blueberry pancakes.., maybe its because they remind him of Sanji's gorgeous eyes..,

I find the fusion of Law and Chopper very interesting.., it's almost like a Jekyll Hyde kinda thing, very original.., and the Intellectual Enhancer? Are you saying Chopper is a smarter doctor than Law? Shishishi, Law's not going to be pleased to hear that.., Chopper would just dance the night away calling you a lying bastard asshole face.., now that's cute..,

I've made the mistake of imagining Brook wearing Duval's iron mask.., I know Brook is actually very handsome but I don't know how I would handle Sanji giving him the face.., that's too harsh! I'm curious about the story behind the skull joke.., cyborg with no stomach.., I can understand no intestines but no stomach? No one he's nothing but skin and bones, he has no way of absorbing nutrients! (Actualy thats not true but its funny nonetheless)

looking forward to more, I'm in love with this dystopia verse.., Zoro's eye sounds beautiful and I wouldn't hold it against you if it was designed as gorgeously as the golden snitch

Wow. This is a fascinating AU. Kudos!

Wonderful I love it please update soon

I love the steampunk so much! I love this AU idea so much! Please please continue this awesome way! I love the world-descriptions, I love how you "modified" the characters (especially the Law-Chopper fusion XD)! And they are reeeaaaally IC! 3 3

Aww you merged Law and Chopper together! :D loove it! I'd like to know more about their lives in that AU but since you said it's a oneshot, oh well. :)

I'll be honsest, when I started reading I had no idea what to expect or how on earth this would be a coffee shop AU. But you pulled it off XD And I was confused with the Chopper/Law thing, until at the end I realised you did a kind of Dr Jackyll/Mr Hide thing XD Very well done.
As for comments, at the start I had some trouble imagining how the city looked like, so maybe you could add some details there, or just write it off as my problem XD And I think you made a typo in the sentence starting with "Everyone had too many problems..." in the last word, I assume that has to be "gearhound"?
In all, a very interesting story and not something I'd expected for the coffee shop AU. Which only proves that you can still stay original in such a well used theme.

First of all: brilliant idea. Steampunk ZoSan fits really good and just imagining them like that... well... :D
I really liked how you transformed the characters to fit the theme: Zoro's eye or Brook's body and mask.
Law/Chopper transformation was a bit confusing at first but worked pretty well at the end.
There is only one thing that gives you a weird feeling: so many unanswered questions and things you simply dont know about the city and the inhabitants. This fic has so much potential for s brilliant multichapter that could close all this holes. Especially the one with how it comes that Chopper tells Sanji he can stay. Considering Law and the city it is a bit weird.
Apart from that the characterisation was pretty good. Well, maybe except Zoro blushing a lot xD but other than that: good job.
I hope there is some useful stuff here for you. And more from this universe would be so great *-*

Wow what an action packed story! You write fighting really well, it reads very smoothly.
Some parts of the story and description felt a little vague, which left me lost at some parts. You definitely have a really cool picture in your head, but I don't know if it translates as well: the description of the city and how life is lived there was a bit confusing. Also, the law/chopper transitioning thing was really cool, but it took a while to understand. I think when you have such a different AU, one that dives into another world like this, it would really do the story good to explain more. The more description of what is happening AROUND the characters, the better the picture is in my head of what is going on. Also, along the lines of diving into a new world, you used a lot of referencing terms to this world (like gearwork): when you do this, make sure you've made it clear as to what you're referring to exactly.
I really liked this story, it's different than most fics I've read out there for zosan which is really cool. You do great work with describing motion, action, and character. I'm sorry this review was so long! Thank you so much for sharing your work!