| Reviews for The Split |
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   Spazzman29 chapter 1 . 8/8 I like how Susan worded the oath. By never explicitly saying that Harry was dead and only saying they'd be seperated by death she only implied that he was dead. Cleverly worded oaths aren't seen often in fics. |
| noice chapter 1 . 3/28 nice |
| gabzep chapter 1 . 3/18 This was really good loved the ending. Poor Neville his gran is not going to be happy. |
| arcticfox42 chapter 2 . 1/28 I can just picture them running about taking care of business. Too bad about Moody. Thanks. |
| N Flamel chapter 1 . 12/8/2019 What a highly involving, strongly emotional story! Jack, you did a very good job in establishing why Harry acted the way he did and supported his decisions. The decisions of Hermione and the two younger Weasleys were well presented and gave credence to Harry's actions. You did an even better job supporting Harry's decision to include Neville with the obvious three. Nev knew what Hannah had said about Harry, including her actions to incite the students to shove Harry out of the Great Hall. Neville's actions caused Harry's separation from him. Loved the climatic scene with Susan Bones(Potter), especially the unveiling. |
| haseosamaa chapter 2 . 10/18/2019 All your story are original .have à good writing and great. Tx |
| Dr1zzy chapter 1 . 10/3/2019 Good story |
| vampdreams chapter 1 . 8/26/2019 Beautiful one-shot love! |
| SomeoneWithTasteDoA chapter 1 . 6/25/2019 Oof... |
| HeartsGlow chapter 1 . 3/18/2019 I think you were a bit harsh with Neville. He didn't leave Harry, Harry left him. Yes, it was all due to Hannah sadly, and I understand Harry's thoughts on the matter. Sometimes we have to realize that those closest to us love/like others that we don't, and we deal with it. Also, if Harry hadn't left Neville behind, it's possible that Nev may have soon forgotten all about Hannah |
| Gilliweed chapter 1 . 2/4/2019 Since the events in this story take place in Great Britain, you should really change the Vendetta name for Blood Feud, Vendetta is really an Italian thing, more specifically a Sicilian thing, and it has nothing to do with Britain. Thank you for your story and for your time and dedication, it's really appreciated! |
| HarryPotterFangirl85 chapter 2 . 12/19/2018 Enjoyed it. |
| Andrew Peverell chapter 1 . 12/13/2018 Great. |
| gginsc chapter 2 . 8/5/2018 I'm sorry Neville was not included in Harry's group, but I understand. Hannah was a bitch and I don't see why he would marry her. |
| Deathmvp chapter 1 . 7/21/2018 this is a great one shot it was a real enjoyment to read thank you for posting it |
