All I have to say is this. Make more soon have a good day

Ah...Sora never did know about those before him. Guess he's gonna find out...

Okay, this looks pretty good. Very interesting. Of course RebukeX7's one is better, but that guy is amazing.

Still good, I look forward to more.

Fun narration!

Please write more!

Please continue.

I like this...keep it up

cool

Haha this is really funny seeing sora basically going through his life again

This is really interesting! I like the idea!

When is the next chapter, because this story is epic and I love it. Hope to read some more soon.

Sincerely,
Shin'en Shukumei

Interesting, I like it. I think it will be a great story.

Sincerely,
Shin'en of the Chaotic Destiny

Very good so far. I'm looking forward to seeing the next chapter.

I'm a little put out by Sora's cursing though, since he's really not the type to swear. That said, it does instill the sense that he's not as young as he appears to be, so it's a good addition to his personality, though I'd recommend toning it down a bit, just to try and keep him more in character. What I mean by that is that try to avoid using the more severe curse words, and use lesser ones. It'll still imply that Sora isn't the same as he was in the beginning, but it also won't make him too out of character.

Just a bit of advice, so feel free to ignore it. I'll still enjoy the story.

Another bit of advice it to be careful of grammar errors. Be sure to double check your paragraphs so that you place comma's where they should go. I've noticed a few times that there wasn't a comma where there should have been.

For example, the final sentence in Chapter 2 is ['What the hell?' Sora thought as he finished reading the notice.] It should have been ['What the hell?' Sora thought, as he finished reading the notice.]

It's not much, but, if you'll notice, I added a comma just after the word 'thought'. It's those little things that make the difference between a good story and an great story, even if it doesn't sound like it. And, quite honestly, I think this story has the potential to be far better then just a great story.

But, like I said, the story itself is very well done, and I'm looking forward to seeing more of it.

O_O... Awesome Concept

More please! I am enjoying this. :]