Beautiful. I think this fix perfectly shows that even if Merlin did more for Morgana, it may not have effected the outcome at all. Destiny is a tricky bastard.

This was so eloquently written and rewriting was splendidly beautiful capturing my attention with the storyline of Morgana's thoughts in a oneshot woven through all five seasons and yet with such a sad ending as it reminds me of why I now hate to watch any other TV show in the fear of which other main character were to die. It's so sad actually everyone is so into Arthur's death and the very few who recognize Morgana's thought, feeling, emotions whatever, her story is truly sadder and can rival Merlin's.
... I just confused myself with my weirdly medieval talk... Too much intake I suppose...
But still this shows her very beautifully and so sad because it's still canon... In the main storyline that is. Nonetheless, keep up the good work!

That was so bittersweet and beautiful! I love the idea of Dragoon *giggle* teaching Morgana...even if the outcome was the same, and I loved how beautifully you described the magic butterflies and flames. I know this is completed, but I wish you would continue!

That was VERY good.

That was sad, and beautiful at the same time. I suppose it was appropriate for it to be a one-shot, otherwise it would have been different, I think. Happy writing any future projects, because I'm sure they'll as great as this one.

Such a wonderful take on Mergana. Still I wish that it could have been different.

Wonderful story. It was interesting to read and I loved the way you wrote it, the writing was fantastic and your imagery and descriptions were spot on.

... beautiful, sadly I had hoped through the whole story that she would chose his side. Yet I still find this beautifully written.

There are a lot of fics that write about Morgana turning good in the end, remorse and whatever..this one treads the thin line between both, like it whispers a little regret even though outwardly she's far gone.

That was absolutely stunning, the imagery and your descriptions were very beautiful and real. Applause!

Wow... that was enchanting It was like almonds - bitter but incredibly tasty (or in this case beautiful).