I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. I love having a long well thought out story to look forward to every day and I strung this out as long as I could.

I love the after story and clear credibility the plot has with the ME world. I look forward to what you come up with next.

This was a great story. I loved the unexpected twist.

This has to be one of the best post war stories I've read. It was credible, full of emotion and totally believable. I've laughed, cried and enjoyed every chapter, every word. Tying that last game scene into the end was brilliant and felt like a natural, proper ending. It was a beautiful love story, an adventure, a thriller and so much more. Fantastic work and I'm really sorry it's over (I'm assuming it's finished even though it's not marked as complete). It's definitely going on my favourites list.

Thank you for writing and sharing such a wonderful piece of fiction.

Holy crap thought it was coming to an end then bam! Great stuff looking forward to more!

I've just read this entire story and was extremely frustrated when I got to here. A cliff hangar and no more to follow on. I've thoroughly enjoyed the whole thing and will eagerly be watching for more.

Love it
Update soon!

Wow this story is really good looking forward to the next chap! Btw am I the only one who reads mordin's dialogue in his voice? Lol x

I love the story so far! The details, the description of emotions, the plots... I adore your writing skills! Keep the writing up!

OMG, you are brutal. Love your writing skills! Please update asap!