I just have one question, about the part after Edd awoke realizing he had sex. Why did he call his virginity or him being a virgin innocence? It's not like he was an offered child.

*Throws a gallon jug full of chicken noodle soup at the author screaming* CHUG CHUG CHUG CHUG! CHUG YOU CHICKADEE YIPPY DOODLE! HUEUHIEHIJHUEEEHUE

I am a majestic Flower Platypus
Hence the name. Not whateva da hellian a chickadee is. where the fuckle are you getting this shit?

I'll ask anyway, YIPPY DOODLE? wtf is that batshit? Some kind of fuckin' alien weasel mating call?

"My fellow soldiers will tell you im a terrible shot."
-Aaron Burr (Hamilton)

wow. I have trully enjoyed this fic, and while you could technically end it here as a cliff hanger and just let the reader assume that they really did live happily ever after in New York, I would hope that there is still a chance you're still working on this 2 years later. I'm sure life has gotten in the way with more important things but hopefully all is well and sometime soon you pick up where you left us.

This was a beautiful chapter but all I can picture is Ed and Eddy sitting on the couch so awkwardly while they can hear them going at it in the bathroom. Once the picture entered my head, I snorted so hard I hurt myself and now I cant think of anything else. I love this story 3

This is the most poetic, meaningful, and flat out gorgeous fanfiction I've ever read. I'm sure you'll do wonders for the literary world! Honestly, never have i read a passage that has made me love the source material even more! I'll never watch the cartoon the same way again, and I mean that in the best way

This is the mo

Brilliant chapter. I hope you can update this soon.

I live this story so much and im just waiting for the day the next chapter is up i hope you're all right and can wait to read more

I'm so so so happy that Kevin managed to actually find him.

I missed this so much...I am so happy their back together

This story is absolutely amazing! I have binged it as much ass possible and I'm in love~! Its so well written and I loved th Edwin character, tho he was a control freak, he was very well thought out. All in all I fell in love with this fanfic 3

Everyday without fail I check to see if you have updated this, you are so talented. I swear this is my favourite read ever. One day I'll publish you and you can make this a paper back book and I can keep it forever without worrying about my internet connection. :3 Thank you for writing, get yourself in the right place whether it be physically or mentally and then carry on writing and updating, because I know the wait is torture but it's honestly so worth it. Thank you ️
From Hannah banana:3