when you get the chance will you be updating this? I like it so far

thats so cool

The reference for chapter 3 is from none piece I think

Great story, so glad that u updated, and I understand that u had school ( I have it to ) so yea... can't wait for the next chapter!

Is the disclaimer from None Piece? :D Nice story so far~

I can't wait to see what happens next. I am glad that Shanks didn't get his arm bitten off and that Luffy gets another cool power.

Update soon

What happens next?

pleas update soon

Look I am not trying to hate, but your character is dangerously Close to marysue levels, why ask and I can tell you. I am not here to tell you that your character is a marysue, I am going to tell you how to fix it to avoid that. First make your character weaker then Luffy not by a lot but noticeable, you know more powers, less physical strength. I am not saying this a bad story, I don't have a opinion on it yet because it is not complete.

Ah good to see your back good chapter can't wait for more

The sea part was a but fast but I really like the story! Can't wait to see what happens next

love this story and how Luffy was blessed with a new power. I am now curious how she will use it in the future. so please keep updating more chapters.

PLEASE CONTINUE!

What happen next post me as soon as you can and get another chapter or two.