Cute Cute Cute :D
Kelly is great, Gibbs would be what i imagine would be spot on for someone in his position. Very well written :D

One of the most fantastic characteristics about your writing is how realistic it is-you certainly didn't sugarcoat this story. You let your characters be overwhelmed and petrified and embarrassed that children know more than they do. It's not all monogrammed baby blankets and silver teething rings-it's messy, it's loud and it's so very real.

this was so sad, i wanted to cry

Interesting! I think the way you write Gibbs is just realistic. He needs to struggle first. Update soon.

I'm so sad? and happy? Kelly's little "can you even read?" made me so happy idk I love this universe ik at first I was all "why does nina love this so much I'm crying I'm so sad" but it's so goOD! !

As a full time parent Gibbs really has a big learning curve and glad little Kelly was there to help since babies will cry until you figure it out.

Kelly is such a tuff little survivor in this short story. You write her with such tenderness and normal child like vocabulary.
Best line "...daddy doesn't know what he is doing." Truth is, most parents have had a "panicked moment or 2 in the bathroom " just like u wrote for Gibbs!
Nicely done.