I love this! I find this capturing the uncertainty of a new relationship and the hurt and despair that the distance caused between them perfectly, but as well as their growth and development over the past few years. I just love it! Than you for writing such a sweet story for these two!

You have a good writing style and I love that the emotion and sexual things were balanced pretty well. Great.

That was really sweet. :) I liked the quiet end to the story that started with so much activity. I liked all the emotion you had throughout, and the characters' reactions to one another. I liked the fade to black, too. It made your story that much more tasteful, and really just fit with the overall feeling of the story. I liked the whole thing very much!

That is so sweet! I'm tearing up right now! This was extremely well written as well. Throughout the whole "make-out" scene, I could here romantic and moving music in the background like in the movies. This got me in my heart and was absolutely perfect!

That was damn good.

I have to admit I admire Ed's eloquence in this particular piece; 'fuckstick' is a description I haven't heard used before.

really loved reading this!

Wonderfully done! I liked how you opened up this story and fleshed our the situation and then brought it back the Ed and Roy's newly found relationship. It was heart wrenching at first but that just made it that much sweeter in the end. Great job, I am impressed!