pls update this.

hope you find your muse soon

There's something about this story if only you got far further than this and a bit longer chapters maybe.
Ron at that age thinking like that nah! anyway so far it was going good and then damn potion the sudden chance would be noticable.. hope that it is quickly gone cause you got fawkes but also a building bond.

Please update soon

Please write more.

Good Nice

Nice good

Please continue the story

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE! Or at least let someone (ME) adopt it! Just kidding, but you should continue. This is one of the best Harmony Soul Bond fics I've ever read.

update please

Oi eu sou uma leitora brasileira e gostei muito da sua história, posta logo por favor

I was trying to think who would be missing in the chasers for a spot be open for Hermione.

I am guessing its Katie Bell.

She was a 2nd year when Harry was a firstie. Some wondered how she could have been on the team before (as Harry was only newbie in canon) if she was only 2nd year. She couldn't have been a full member the year before since it was such a fuss that Harry was "youngest in a century" to play on the house teams.
It was rationalized she was a reserve player in her first year and became full member in her e2nd year which was Harry's 1st year.

There's a mistake here, were it mentions "the twins, Ron's brother"... that is a contradiction as twins is more than one, and brother indicates only one. It should be "brothers".

I was going to complain about how easy it was to use magic on Hagrid since a group of Aurors couldn't affect him with the multiple stunners. But then I remembered this was Dumbledore and he had the Elder Wand so it's likely he is only one to be able to get pass Hagrid's giant blood's resistance to magic.

Though Ron saying Hermione was pretty and asking about love potion took me by surprise as he's only 11... is he smarter in this?

take your time