I love this so much... Every aspect was so well written, the distrust, the exhaustion, the stress... So good...

Perfect. There were no spelling errors or anything. It was wonderful to read.

Wonderful, with just the right mixture of desolation and dogged determination. The small "can I trust you" moment fits beautifully with that little painful-but-true exchange between Steve and Natasha in the movie ("Do you trust me?" "I do now.") Loved it.

I liked the interactions over food. From the beans to the oatmeal was my favourite. It felt very natural and had just the right amount of wry humor.

The overall theme and repetitions in the piece were well placed/paced.

The twelve days/some number hours in the opening paragraph tripped me up a bit-I was pretty sure it was counting down but for whatever reason I had to check three times to make sure they were in the proper sequence. Maybe if there was another sentence between them for more visual seperation?

Nice. I like this.

It's going to be hard to adapt, but if Hydra had had its way, all those honest SHIELD agents would be dead.

I don't really have any criticism to give. It's well written and I enjoyed reading it. _