Reviews for Hold Me Closer
TutorGirlml chapter 1 . 6/2/2014
I know what you mean about the finale - it was so wonderful that I'm still grinning at the thought of it. You capture that same glorious, joyful, True Love feeling here. This little one-shot pack A LOT of emotion. There are so many beautiful, touching moments, but I especially loved, "It's never been like this before. There have never been absolutely no secrets between herself and anyone in her life, but right now, she can see everything. Every little nuance of his love is hers to keep." So powerful - and exactly why Killian is so wonderful for Emma. Loved it!
AmiserableLove chapter 1 . 5/22/2014
Oh my goodness i missed your writing! This was gorgeous and beautiful and PERFECT! Awesome. Awesome. Amazing job.

Loved it.

Obviously. ;)
Poor-Dumb-Killian chapter 1 . 5/21/2014
Awww, right in the feels! Love it!
Willofthewisp chapter 1 . 5/18/2014
I'm so glad you have it where Emma's not beating herself up about what happened with Regina. It's not her fault and she did nothing wrong, first of all, but this is part of Emma's growth, a focus on what she has done well and what lies ahead of her vs. always beating herself up. You always have her in-character!

"...but hearing it out loud-without walls, without doubts..."-YES! Yes, we all know it, but we want to HEAR it!

"Every little nuance of his love is hers to keep."-I love the wording here. Such a beautiful fact.

Aw! This is so loving, from both sides! There is an erotic quality to it even though they're very soft, light touches ("...their lips barely pressed together, their foreheads resting on each other."), but we feel the whole package of their relationship with this, and most of all the sheer happiness and relief they both feel at having each other. This is just beautiful.
alexandra.sarafolean chapter 1 . 5/13/2014
Aww so cute and sweet and...loved it!
Aeviel chapter 1 . 5/12/2014
This is so adorable and prefect I can't even
clarkLover1 chapter 1 . 5/12/2014
awww so cute!
SweettFace chapter 1 . 5/12/2014
that was perfect!
AllisonSwan chapter 1 . 5/12/2014
PERFECT
WinchesterSmile chapter 1 . 5/12/2014
loved it!
ISolemnlySwearToManageMischief chapter 1 . 5/12/2014
Oh I'm right there with you on the Captain Swan ship of "finally, yes!" This is a great little one shot. That line, "we've been courting since the moment we met..." is pure gold. Honestly, frame it. Love this!
Harry and George chapter 1 . 5/12/2014
WHo couldn't stay with this impression of Killian! Love it!
Tandy chapter 1 . 5/12/2014
Perfect epilogue to the episode. Loved it.
swishandflickwit chapter 1 . 5/12/2014
Would you fancy that, I'M ON A FLAIL HIGH TOO WOOT WOOT! I love your work I do, but the moments between Killian and Emma in any fanfic of them being officially together has never felt tangible or possible to me because it wasn't legit on the show. But now... now they're canon and moments like these I can finally feel are happening. I can feel them literally coming to life before me in this exact way, I can see them going towards this path because they're FIIIIINALLY CANON AND I CANT I CANT I CAAANT!

I can't wait to read more from you during the hiatus. Bring on the CS fluff cause there's no denying it's realness now!
Nouqueret chapter 1 . 5/12/2014
Great story and great episode... The episode was written as a final ( think they did it just in case they were not renewed) wich means in season four we can expect just about anything... The Snow Queen Not Elsa from Frozen was evil , remember her from Narniah.
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