This is SO GOOD. I know Dax said it sarcastically, but really, prime dialogue here. You had me rolling with some of the lines. Love the writing style. Everything flows great. I would love to see just a bunch of chapters of Keira experiencing different things in Spargus. Ugh, love this so much.

I'd like to see Kiera convincing Jak to take her with him during his exile. That would make for a neat start to chapter 2.

Plus, loved Daxter's first nickname for Kleiver. That made me laugh.

Wow this is ten times better than i thought it would be. If you dont continue i will cry.

You - are full of surprises! I originally got introduced to your writing from Fairy Tail Fics and have loved your writing ever since Hard Liquor - and then you go and write for the very first fandom I ever wrote fanfics for (don't read those, they're bad haha) and still have a soft spot for randomly? OMG I love you!

Seriously though, I agree, Keira didn't get enough love or props in Jak 3 - always had the suspicion that some writer let the wrong head take control and/or they were smokin' when they played twister with the plot and the girl ole' Jacky boy's been trying to get from the very first game was suddenly thrown into the background and replaced by the new bombshell redhead that didn't seem to have any romantic interest in Jak from the second game. But I digress - really glad Jak X made up for it a bit but Jak 3 will always be somewhat of a traumatic gaming experience for me. Especially at the end of the first two games where the two childhood friends almost seal the deal with a kiss only to get interrupted and in the end of the whole so-called trilogy - well you know what happens. Total let down.

Anyway, your writing! Great as always! Probably spotted on typo, but I feel like you got Kleiver down pat and I always love Keira getting all grease monkey! I also love her sass towards Jack and Daxter. I love how she doesn't back down from Kleiver, manages to not only fix the buggie, but win the race and hell, have a drink with him like it ain't nothin'. I'm sure it's wishful thinking and you have a lot of other fics on your plate, but if there are more quick J&D oneshots of yours in the future, I'll be your biggest fan. :-)

And if you're into Keira being her smart sassy self and throwing around more mechanical terms because she's awesome - I recommend taking a look at Mechanic Girl - the mechanic lingo in there when I read it amazed me: s/3309814/1/Mechanic-Girl

Thanks for the read and for bringing back memories for me.

Normally I would go check out that fic, but its not a series I know much about. So...naaah. (: one thing I like about most fanfictions is you can actually read em with minimal prior knowledge and still undrstand most of the story. Hehe. You seem to be havin a thing for all the badass ladies recently. :P