Cliff hanger thanks for the read I hope there my be more to this story

I really enjoyed reading this, shame it's not continued I would have loved to get your view on more

Totally loving this story! Please continue to write and update : )
Sugar

Glad you're picking this story up again. The subtext for the characters is really rewarding. Thanks for continuing it.

I hope we get to see Shu and Patrick have a long chat with one another. Her compassion and wisdom would do him good.

Interesting perspective on this story. LOVE Shu, hope she gets to meet the team.

I can't wait for what happens next. I really enjoy your insights into the interactions of characters. Dennis' wife seems pretty sassy and loving. She reminds me of Jane's Sam. This is great.

This story is SUPERB and your original character Shu is SUBLIME. Thank you so very much for writing!

Enjoying this story kind of a different POV on the whole Lisbon/Jane drama as it unfolds.

And Maybe you can also explain why at the end of 'Black Hearts' He kinda pushed Lisbon to take the Job offer. BTW I can now safely say That Abbott has grown on me cause I just read an entire chapter with Abbott in it (with no Jane Lisbon there). Looking forward to the next update.
P.S. I'd like to meet Mrs Abbott and say a big Thank you to her.

You know your speculations kinda sticks true to the story. And gives a whole different view to the Mindset of Jane And Lisbon in The Mentalist 2.0.

I just stumbled across this story and I love it. I love this chapter. I love Shu. :) She's fantastic.

Abbott's wife is very wise, but then she would need to be. I do hope we get to see her on the show, and I suspect you have characterized her very accurately. Looking forward to more.

Great job of getting in Lisbon's head. I enjoyed this very much, and it all rang true.

Love this story. Please update soon.