this was another great chapter, and again fucking funny as all hell

frank Laura is best Laura and Hellion is again very sweet

frist of I have to say this story was fucking highluarous. very few weigters are able to pull off dry humour but you did so perfectly well done.

secondly while im not overly fond of Julian or his Pairing with Laura as I found that he was bit to much of a jack ass and sometimes needlessly cruel or mean. but I have to say you were able to make him a thousand times more likeable.

he comes of as very sweet and earnest here

I did find the instance of Logan calling Laura his sister and most everyone else insisnting on that being how they ideife with each as. but that was of how Logan introduced Laura to everyone when he brought her in from the cold but that was always weird to me as I see them more as father and Doughter so seeing a this reminder of their one time brother and sister statis is a little weird.

but when one of the few relations Logan has that doesn't hate his guts is also his clone and a few decaded (biologicaly speaking) younger than him than any relationship is gonna be weird. be it bother and sister , father and Doughter, grand father...uncle nease.

its weird.

anyways this was great

great, like the character growth

You pretty 'got' Laura, which is truly fascinating, thank you. Hope for continue.

words do not describe how much I love this story. it is perfect.

Continue this story. : )

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That was adorable and wonderful and amazing.

That was so amazing! I can't wait for the next chapter!

This was a good chapter, you portray the characters well. Keep it up.

Thanks for the update.
Sunbathing using the Danger Room? Trust it to Laura to think of something like this.

Love Julian and Laura

Didn't Julian pick his codename to suck up to Frost and prove he could be as awesome as her, and he does have the potential if only he'd work on his attitude problem, Emma's earned it and well as a woman she can get away with it much more easily than he can

Very intelligent people become successful and too much success without failure or setback can lead to arrogance but it takes someone especially stupid to also be arrogant

Take Doom for example he is almost as smart as he believes himself to be, and as the second greatest super scientist and at least the third greatest sorcerer he is the most talented mortal in the universe (even Wakanda's Panther god says the future is probably going to suck and Doom is one of perhaps the only one able and WILLING to fix it) and not to take away the amazing accomplishments he has achieved in his mind being second isn't enough

Don't let Blindfold near fortune cookies ha

I'm happy for them but well it would be one thing if they were only making food for themselves

I hope you do continue, but it may be best to take off the complete tag no? it could be misleading.

Will you be touching something from the comics like him getting hurt by deathstrike or is it all Original content. Not that I mind since I love where you take these two kids.

Finally, could you have Julian go into the room, see Logan and blurt out "You sing in the shower?"

I'm crying. My fallen ship. Oh captain, my captain! Great job! It was incredibly sweet and funny :D

*Gasp* I'm in love with the way you write! 3.3 I mean, I always loved this paring before, but now... ASDFGHJKL! OTP? I think so! :D Also, OMIGOSH YOU MADE HELLION SO DAMN HOT! Just thank you for this!

It was good enough that I'm disappointed there isn't a second chapter.