| Reviews for More Than Just An Alliance |
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Cassi0chan chapter 21 . 7/10/2018 Thank you so much for writing this great story! I'm a huge LuNa fan, but recently I've started to also like LawNa. The shippers for this couple are much less and therefore I'm very happy that such a skilled writer enjoys LawNa as well. I love your writing style. The only thing I'm a little sad about is that you didnt write any part of the lemon from Law's POV. And don't ever worry about the lemon to be too long. I don't think anybody would mind at all. |
gogetjinxy1993 chapter 21 . 6/25/2018 I know I'm so late to the party but I really need to tell you this has got to be the best law and nami fic. thank you for writing this. keep up the good work and keep being inspired |
Hurricane-Chibi chapter 1 . 4/2/2018 Loved the story and I especially loved how you didn’t make Nami weak. I hope there will be a sequel in the future. |
Nami the Gaylord chapter 21 . 11/27/2017 Tbh still read this |
Guest chapter 21 . 9/1/2017 i liked it. |
Guest chapter 18 . 9/1/2017 very good |
Guest chapter 14 . 9/1/2017 i hope law is going to be okay |
Guest chapter 21 . 5/6/2017 DO A SEQUEL! You write such a great connection between Nami and Law! |
creativesm75 chapter 21 . 1/15/2017 cool |
Guest chapter 11 . 8/18/2016 Nani? What the F! You ruin the mood men! |
JewelSonata chapter 21 . 7/28/2016 I read through the entire 21 chapters of your fic in less than a day despite an important deadline coming up at work. I think that says how much I loved this story :) I do hope you write a sequel since you just converted me into a LawNa fan. Once again, thank you for the wonderful story and I hope to see more of your work in the future! |
Guest chapter 21 . 6/26/2016 Love this BD |
savi chapter 21 . 3/24/2016 Hey, i just want to say to you, that i love you're style. You have a great writting talent. Every time i'm reading you're stories i'm astonished how god they are. The charakters, style, plot everything. I'm addicted to you're storis. You are brillant writer. Keep up the good work. And sorry for my English;) |
endingsarenotalwaysbad chapter 21 . 3/6/2016 Sooo, yeah I was totally lazing around today and craved some LawNa feels. I honestly don't know where they were coming from but I just wanted to reread that story of yours... I really can't believe that this was your first LawNa fanfic. It really was so, SO good. I've always admired your insight of the characters and their personalities - especially Nami's and Luffy's! you write them both so well, it's really fun when you are writing them both interacting. :D And then Law. I've always KNEW that Oda kind of tried to make Law appear shady, evil and someone you shouldn't trust. But after Dressrosa and now seeing him on Zou with his crew and hanging out with the Straw Hats, I'm convinced that he's a hidden weirdo and fanboy like Luffy and the rest. He might not show his fascination with ninjas that openly but we all saw his more goofy side then and there. I'm just a little frustrated because I kind of hoped for more LawNa interactions and more screentime for the Heart Pirates. They totally work well together. And I wanted to see some flashbacks with Nami and Bepo. Because I really think that the things you described in the first couple of chapters kind of happened?! :/ I know that the whole Sanji situation and the big revelation about the little Momo-brat are top priority now... And I really like the plot twist, though I'm a bit confused that Sanji's family suddenly got dragged into it out of nowhere?! Is it just me or is it really weird?! :'D Anyways, I'm really hoping for more moments to fangirl about and of course maybe new stories/chapters from you! Don't feel pressured, though! Lots of love to you! It was a great nostalgic trip. I even believe that this was my first LawNastory that I've ever read?! xD |
The Richmaster chapter 21 . 2/20/2016 This was a really good fic; I particularly enjoyed reading the way that the romance between Law and Nami slowly builds up and the ending felt really fitting too with the way that neither wanted to get in the way of the other's dream. |