Wow. You tugged on my emotions, and made me able to truly understand both Alfred and Arthur's positions and their emotions.
I really want to see a happy ending, but even if I don't, this was a really good one

Amazing, portrayed emotions very well and the character were very well written. Please continue the story it is fantasticly written.

This was heartbreaking. And the concept was very original.

Loooooooooooooove itttttt

Great story, it's so sweet and sad! I love Arthur so much in this story, he's such a hero. I'd definitely like to read more about Alfred, Allen and America. Their dyamics with each other and with Arthur are so interesting and have so much potential to develop. I'd love to read Alfred/alter's reunion with the rest of his family. Are you going to continue this story? You definitely should. In the meantime, thank you for your thought provoking, compelling story!

O M G . . .

This fic definitely beyond what I expected from the summary . . . !

I never though of Personality Disorder !

But I'm still confused what happened in camp that makes Alfred changes like that ? ! !
Did I missed something ?

But what I Love is the personalities wasn't that bad . . .

Was Allen the 2p America version ? His violent personality remind me of him . . .

But with how the personality as America love Arthur as Family, Brother, Friend, and Romantic Lover, doesn't that mean it wasn't platonic... which... as real brothers in here, just... ugh, complicated... I guess...

And another reason why I love this fic is how Arthur accept all those personalities of Alfred. It was sweet and nice . . .

This fic felt so much Love . . . :')

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Btw, I laugh at certain part, at this:
- America cares for England so much that it's almost sickening. -

Real England probably envy this. and happy to know America cares so much for him. xD

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It was Lovable...

i have to say...that was a very interesting story,the plot...ive never read a fic like this before...i like how you put the personality's of America, 2p America, and Alfred all together and how you made human Arthur interact with them...im impressed...i believe you wanted this to be a one shot but...i think this could be a even greater story...i understand if that's not what you want but i defiently would be interested in what you would come up with!

This is so heartbreaking, yet so beautiful at the same time. The characters are portrayed brilliantly and I couldn't help but feel more than an ounce of pity to those that do suffer from split personalities. Thank you for writing this work of art.

Wow. That was really good. I was left with kind of an empty feeling on the inside, but I still felt love and respect for Arthur, being able to take care of his brother like this. I really wish I knew more people like this.

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This is seriously amazing. Words escape me at how beautiful and intriguing and emotional this was. You're fantastic and your story is awesome!

Terribly sad. My heart hurts. Your writing has so much raw emotion.

This was a very interesting read- I feel so sorry for poor Alfred.

That...That was...wow. Beautiful. I really can't find the words to describe how I feel about this. I'm angry over what happened to Alfred, touched that Arthur would continue to take care of him even though it obviously wasn't easy, and an utter mess that any of it happened at all. I love all the personalities, even Allen. He's a bit sick, but aren't we all to some degree? America was perfect. This whole thing was perfect. Thanks for making me cry.

Ah, beat still my heart. That was so good! I don't what that's like in real life, but Arthur is so good, and for some reason, I really liked Allen. Is he a sociopath? Probably. But he's also like Alfred's older brother, and for the same reason I love Hollow Ichigo, I just can't hate protective older brothers. Especially if he's actively trying to restrain himself for Alfred's sake and won't hurt Arthur

I'm not crying. I'm sweating through my eyes.