The name Kyuubi is 'Kurama' not 'Kurma' ?!
Or author change it according to thought or there is an error?
Sorry Author. I just want to correct what's wrong. Not wanting to blame the author himself.
Arigatou Gozaimasu!

great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.

Can you let Zabuza & Haku survive and maybe join Konoha?

Again. Sakura's last name it spelled incorrectly. If you don't know how to spell it, look it up.

You spelled Sakura's family name wrong.

Amazing! I love it a lot! Please continue soon!

The plot is amazing and the story isn't bad, but there are a lot of grammer, spelling, and punctuation mistakes. Like you should capitalize every person's name. There are a lot of run on sentences also. But otherwise it's an amazing story.

I love this naru is annoying them and I'm dying by laughter

you need to split up your dialog better. mashing every speaker together is confusing and hard to read. each new speaker gets a line of their own.

lov it

I like this story so far. It's hilarious!
Though your spelling could use some work. Can't wait for what happens next.
Update soon!

Hey that's my job. Stupid civilians. Taking my only good job...

HAHAHA, love your story! Keep up the good work

Okay the plot is nice but the chapters are extreamly short. The spelling is atrocious. (Especially names.) And the grammer needs work. Aside from that good work. You made an outline of where you want to go. Added in stuff that wasn't in canon. And even made me laugh.