Omg I love this so much

This should be a series!

I know I haven't reviewed you a lot, but I enjoy your stories very much! And this one is no exception! I really love the cuddliness and the sensuality in this story, and how Ling is just trying so hard, it almost hurts to read about his efforts. But you write Lan Fan so well, and I can completely understand why she does the things she does, and in a way, Ling's advances, cute as they are if viewed from a different perspective, come across as inappropriate and desperate. And I think that's so important, because that's basically their entire relationship right there, and you just capture it so well.

I'm a little confused about some of the details here. Why was Ling so quick to wrap her up in the blankets when she was bowing to him? Was that related to the birthmark he pointed out later, which she was so eager to hide, or the secret he claims to know? Or are those things not connected at all?

I swear to god, I'm getting ever so closer to shipping LingFan.

This is a beautiful fic and the descriptions in your story make me want to include more in mine. Ling is a seductive mofo, jesus christ, despite the boundaries Lan Fan has set, how long will it be until she'll get /pushed/ to those boundaries? One line I am SO stoked about (because it is damn cLEVER) is the point where Lan Fan mentions the "Ling grin" and it's the only time she's said his name in the entire fic. Brownie points to you, dear author.

Thank you for writing! This was a really nice read.