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Wow so touching I was crying the whole time!

Love the last line. Made me laugh out loud:) This story was really touching. It was great. Maybe now Adam will think twice before he plays another game of 'Bionic Brother Toss', now that he knows how Chase will end up. Its so sad Chase ended up this way, he didn't even graduate high school. When that happens you KNOW something is wrong with Chase.

Well, this was beautifully written, loved it:)

Aw! This is so good! This one-shot teaches everyone a great lesson. If you kept doing something that hurts another, that person might end up in great pain. Kinda like bullying.

awe sweet.

I loved it so sweet

Aw! So odd, yet so cute! Bionic brotherly love! Poor Chase though. At least Adam will try to fix it.

Aw! Yay, Adam learned something! That's a first. Very sweet! Slightly disturbing . . . but not in a bad way! Good job!

Aww, that was so cute! I love this, this is adorable :D

Love it love it! I know, right? It seems like Chase is always put down :-( GR. Write more!

Awwww! So cute! Love it so much! It was so fun to read ;))) love it!