Hot and sexy story! Love that 'Maria is exceptional in a thunderstorm' line from Georg to Max :D

This was so hot, and sizzlingly sexy. Loved it. Loved the trick at the beginning - you really had me there, lol.
What a blessing thunderstorms are: getting rid of pesky chaperones to enable Maria and Georg to enjoy a passionate night of forbidden love. Delightful.
Haha, I laughed at Maria's words: "Oh I wish I could see that." Don't we all!

Great work. In the beginning, I thought that thiswas Maria's first night at the villa. But I was delighted that wasn't actually the case. And I loved the conversation between Max and Georg. "Maria is exceptional during thunderstorms" Lol! That was too good ;)

What a great story. I love how you describe Maria and Georg finding out all about each other but my favourite part is right at the end with Georg's cheeky exchange with Max.

HA! Wonderful. Love Georg bragging about Maria's abilities during inclement weather! This is great. Loved the bait and switch on the thunderstorm and Maria's acceptance and embracing of their secret. Loved it all!

Loved it!

"I ask you to stay"... this must be one of the best reuse of movieline ever... loved that... and loved everything else about this story... hot indeed... ;)
Loved the end with Max...

hot Hot HOT HOT! I love the way you think it's her first night when you begin reading it, but it turns out they're already engaged. I loved the way you wove the lines from the film into it as well as the Mary Poppins reference at the end.

*cracks up* Poor Max!
Hearts and Hugs,
Abby

Loved the whole romantic, hot idea behind this story . I always love it when people pretend to be writing about MFT and then surprise! Anyway, there were certain phrases and ideas that I really especially loved (they made MY stomach lurch!). It's hard to write this kind of intimacy and you did a wonderful job. Thanks so much for this story!

"Maria is exceptional in a thunderstorm."

I can't even stand it, that line is so wonderful and hilarious.

i think my favorite part was maria turning georg's words against him "you did say we're practically married." i love this maria. glad you posted. brilliant title btw. ;)

I love coy Georg! And I love how in the beginning is didn't know if this was taking place the night of the original thunderstorm or what! So great, can't wait to read more from you!

Great story! Wonderful written

I'm so happy you posted it!

The beginning is lovely, leading us to believe G is really angry.
Ha! Very convenient that the tree blocked the way! Will it take a few days to clear it? ;)
Ooooo yes! I like a honest Maria! The fact that she asks him to show her, tells me she trusts him completely!
Okay need to calm down a bit here, hot!

Are they going to break some more rules?!