I loved this. I read the entire fanfic, all 25 chapters in a half hour. Completely hooked. It's been awhile since the last update, but it's amazing.

I lived this story

I'm happy they both opened up about the baby and Halstead telling her he loves her. My heart aches for her though behind their lost. I'm catching up on the chapters and this is one good story.

So beautiful they are starting a family and married. I sure hope he's still in intelligence :) This is a lovely story and I enjoyed reading it very much. Thanks for sharing

uhoh... I wonder how that talk will go...

My heart aches for Erin and the lost of their child. I'm glad she finally consulted with him on how she feels. This chapter is awesome. Both their confessions are moving and glad they opened up to one another. I'm enjoyed the story. Wanted to post my comments for this chapter as I continue reading.

Awe they are finally having a baby! This was super cute. I honestly hope you decide to write a sequel. I think them being parents will be too cute. Erin would totally be opposite of what everyone would expect. She would not want to the leave the baby. Having the only hard time deciding when to go back. Jay loving that they are parents but missing his wife as his partner but thankful she is home safe instead of being shot at on a daily basis. Antonio loving being a godfather. Voight being a grampy because it sounds like grumpy, a nice joke Ruzek started with Jay that just stuck. Since we all know Voight still has not warmed up to Jay being with Erin completely even though he is happy his "little girl" is so loved and happy.

definitely interested in a sequel!

Good Chapter! Is there a sequel? Hope so :) Till next time!

Omg love the ending! So, so adorable! Yes, yes, yes there NEEDS to be a sequel!

I think you should either do a sequel or Atleast one more chapter of the epilogue and then end the story with their new life going well.

I love it I'm glad they had a happy ending! Please make a sequel!

I absolutely LOVED every single chapter of this story! You captured the characters so well and your writing is incredible! I for one would be thrilled if you wrote a sequel for this story! I would love to see how Jay/Erin and the rest of the unit handles a pregnancy/baby! Hope to see more from you soon and keep up the great work!

Awesome chapter. :D Yes another story please. :D

Awwww I loved this! Thank you for doing an epilogue! It was perfect! Please make a sequel! We need some linstead to help us endure this season of linseride!