Bucky lost his left arm not his right

:)

I'm a really picky and detail oriented person. It's one thing if you change little parts of the story to fit yours, but it's another when you change major details. Such as Bucky's arm. His LEFT arm was replaced, not his right. Frankly, this killed the whole story for me and I've only just finished the first chapter. I don't really feel like reading the rest for fear of more major details altered.

Pleaseeee update !

i dont speak russian but its it da for yes and nyet for no?

oh god so sad

pretty sure its his left arm that is metal not the right.

It's "Da" in Russian meaning Yes not "Dat". It might be a typo, but still.

Soldier-boy in Russian would be "mal'chik-soldat". Just revert the nouns.

Cool story:)

Will you write a sequel? This was awesome!

write a sequal

The first chapter immediately drew my attention. James' confusion as to why he was there was palpable from the get go and the "woman" was immensely funny in all her sarcastic splendor. ""I've only wiped the blood from your handsome face." - I literally chuckled at that. Dominika sure seemed like a survivor from the get go, trying to trick a man while he is down so to speak what with her being soviet. Love how you didn't automatically made either of them superior to the other, but rather focused on their different strengths. I also love how Nika isn't the cliche Mary Sue type of character. She has flaws like the rest of us and did what she must to survive. I find that immensely refreshing and the chemistry they had from the very beginning was amazing. Especially found that conversation about the "strange americans" highly entertaining. I felt that you truly did capture both of the characters' emotions extremely well and that you kept him especially in character.

My word, them patching each other up after Hydra had their fun with them- it's like the equivalent of a girls night, just without the wine and chocolates and fun. Okey no scratch that, but yeah, a Hydra girls night then. Nika's thoughts on Steve I found highly entertaining and James' persistence really did shine through. Wow, Nika watching out for her soldier boy, what with tricking the Hydra bitches, I was cheering her on the entire time. Damn, when she received her punishment though, harsh, very Hydra-like so good with that. Glad to see you didn't shy away from the violence. Fuck, (don't pardon the french) when he came back from the mind wipe, that was some of the best descriptive story telling I've seen. All that emotion, just wonderful!

Baron Strucker is a rather hateful character and I was really in hate with him from the moment he began circling Nika. My word, even though I doubt Nika would ever really say it, it was clear that she really did love James in staying for him and Baron not having to use mind control to keep her under wraps but rather James' life against , you definitely nailed him I think, the sleezy bastard. He is right to fear Nika though, hell hath no fury like a woman scorned and all that. And yeah, when he killed that man for beating up Nika during training it was uber sweet. Especially since he was now the teacher. And yes, them becoming intimate was not a matter of if rather ha matter of when. And I can't believe I'm m saying this but was a teeny bit bummed that it was only suggested. And now I sound like a pervert. Oh well, where they are concerned it can't be helped.

Absolutely adored that glimpse we got of what could be were it not for Hydra and their tyranny as well as James remembering glimpses of Steve and Nika covering for him. Have to say Hydra had rather innovative ways of keeping them in check, implanting a tracker into Nika and all that. Clever way to showcase his feelings for her as well- actually saying what he felt.
Absolutely loved their encounter with natasha and how they seem to complement each other well. Him as tthe muscle with her as the brain. Nika's thoughts on Fury and James' irritation at his persistentness- highly entertaining. Really. Her meeting and deal with Fury omw, she's a BAMF!

And then Her taking down Hydra, really interesting yet welcomed twist. Their reunion with the rest of the Avengers was awesome and you most certainly did nail Tony.

Now, that being said, I absolutely love your writing style. The mistakes there are are miniscule. The only real critique I have is that it is way to short for my liking ;). You are an absolutely amazing author and your way of conveying the story is mature yet poignant. The character building that took place was immensely enthralling and yeah, basically I'm going to suffer from serious withdrawal syndromes now.

Keep BLOWING our minds and best of luck with anything you have going on in the future. Sorry that I was like a year late to the party that is this awesome story.
Sincerely
Eserechia

cool

I'm impressed. Most of the times I despise OC's, but you've managed to create one that I really do genuinely like and want to know more about.

Congrats, friend.