Man, very gripping! As much as I want my boys to have the safe life they deserve, the whole "separating them for their own good" idea always gets my heart racing. Lovely

Good story.

I liked this story, are you from Poughkeepsie too?

What a creative story! And so well told! I love that you picked up on their emergency word and mad a story from it- it's a story I didn't even know I wanted to read and I loved it! You were so wonderful with all the details and especially the escape ( which I think a lot of writers would have glossed over). I really really liked this story and your idea! Congrats on some great work!

An interesting and well-executed idea for Poughkeepsie. Makes you wonder if anything like this ever happened to the Winchesters.

(I'm too lazy to log in) This was one of the best stories I've ever read I love it so much

This is awesome and I've read this about three times.

Awesome! Wicked short story.

LOVED it and was soooo scared as to what would happen to the boys. Any chance you may someday to a multi chapter continuation of this story? Thanks so much, Nicole. :)

oh my god, loved it, oh my god,words can't describe my feelings and thoughts thanks

I don't know who you are (obviously) but omg! That was a great story! I loved it. I started reading and forgot it was a fanfic. It totally gave me the feels. Please don't stop writing. Ever.

Well-written and a believable story. I was horrified by what the civilians did/ would do to our Weechesters, but it made for a great theory on the origin of Poughkeepsie.

Really enjoyed this - it is so likely that this type if encounter would've happened to our boys :( I love resourceful and caring Dean!

Extremely traumatic for the Weechesters. :( The outsiders don't understand, but they're so resourceful getting out of sticky situations.

Very nice Teenchester story. Very neatly written and enjoyable.