Awesome story! I love it! Bravo!

I love this! So cute and poignant and creative! Killian's initial reaction to his older self is so sad but totally believable. I'm glad he changes his impression in the end :)

CUTE!

Fun story, enjoyed it!

Oh, this is so cute! You did such a fantastic job illustrating the similarities and contrasts of their past selves and using it to further their relationship. Just awesome!

I loved the story, the idea was great; I hope to read more from you soon!

This was so great! It was very unique. I really enjoy your writing.

That was great. I mean, I wouldn't have been adverse to just a bit more Captain Swan toward the end there, but then I could always do with a bit more Captain Swan. :P

I really liked the way you paralleled them with their last selves, though. And even more interesting was how you paralleled them with the other's past self. Funny how they kinda took reversed paths in life.

Great work. :)

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! Oh my gosh. I love how teenage Emma got to be truly happy for a moment. David and Mary Margaret's reactions were sweet.
I ESPECIALLY loved how Killian said goodbye to...er, Killian.
When he was like, "Watch out for crocodiles," and he was like, "Oh hell, is that how it happened?"
Best. Thing. Ever. I laughed so hard.
Brilliant writing as always.
Peetagrl3-TheRollyJoger

Quite frankly, I think this was a fabulous chapter :D
This is hilarious and awesome and very feels-inducing.
Loved it!
Peetagrl3-TheRollyJoger

This is bloody fantastic so far. I love the concept and the excitement. And the confusion...haha.
Great golly good job, dearie

Peetagrl3-TheRollyJoger

Nicely done. A very interesting idea.

AHHHHHHHH I LOVED THIS SOOOO MUCH. Okay. I really loved this concept. I loved the story. Imagine actually seeing this? The fandom would go crazy. But brilliant story.

I love this story! Great job!

Amusing three shot. {Smiles}