The setting is very interesting and I would continue to read this. I don't think it has been done before. However, your formatting needs a lot of work. While a wall of text is not good, you should at least have paragraphs, not every sentence in a new line. Right now, it is a chore to read.

Good story
But you got to work on your grammar.
What current season in SG1 in this story?

It is excellent chapter.I look forward to future updates.

Good update.

Good concept, and one I don't think has really been done. But this story is ruined by your bad and really amateur writing. Every sentence doesn't need to be it's own paragraph. Stories are not a dry emotionless report of events. People have more depth to them than you are allowing them here.

Oh, and you need to do more proofing of a chapter than just a spell check.

Great chapter Update soon

dealing with loki is always a double edged sword.

missing quotes... everywhere

I like it.

Colonial mythology also has Asgard references. It takes some digging, but words such as Valkyrie, Ragnarok, and Berzerk all point to Norse influences in their past.

Well looks like the Colonial made contact with someone that they shouldn't have, well good idea,

Looks like a good start.

hahaha loki is back in the game

Great chapter Update soon

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Interesting take on the cross-over idea. I look forward to where you go with this, but hope that you get a beta reader soon.

Bad Loki, bad Loki!