Please say she's pregnant! Update soon please:)x

Funny, how similar the title is to this one story called 5 times jake drunk texts Amy and the 1 time Amy does.

I love how each chapter is an important step in their relationship, can't wait to read more!

Again, loved it! Writing is continuously great and this story just keeps getting better and better. I will see you tomorrow for an update!

This was so them, so cute. Again, I'm glad his proposal wasn't full Boyle- it was just like them, adorably dorky. It made me laugh too! Which is great, much like your writing. I'm enjoying this story and I will be back for another chapter (:

Sorry about that, touch screens are not ideal when writing reviews. *i love your writing (:

Beautiful writing as always! I loved this chapter (especially how long it was) and Amy's mother. I really liked how the moment they realised that they were dating wasn't over the top, it was cute and simple. I can't wait to read the next chapter, hopefully there will be some interaction between Jake and Amy's family, but if there isn't, I will still probably love it because I love y

Loved it! Loved it! Loved it! I love the fics that have them dating & Amy realising it months later :)

Aw, so cute. I'm glad they're back to speaking. As per usually, your writing is excellent and the characters are definitely in character. I'll be here tomorrow for an update because I really can't get enough of this (:

Aww, this was cute! I'm glad Jake and Amy made up.

Loved it! That definitely seems like a thing Jake would do. It'll be interesting to read how he plans on digging himself out of that hole and how he manages to get together with Amy. Your writing was great and I kinda like the more... Agnsty stuff.

Thanks for writing,
I'll see you tomorrow!

Forgot to sign the review I just left. xD Fail. This is Anon154, not a random guest. ;)

This was a really powerful and raw chapter. The angst made me really feel for Jake, and the hell he must've been going through during those six months.
These had to be some of my favorite lines in this chapter, ones that hit a nerve painfully:

"Five months into the operation and three months into his relationship with Angela, she revealed to him that she knew he was working for the FBI." (This line scared me. I literally froze, because I was scared if I read on, Jake would die.)

"Leo had been raised by mobsters working for their father, he didn't know any other way of life, was never given any other choice in life but to continue on his incarcerated father's legacy." (This gave some perspective; showed me their was more to a villain, than just playing the role of a villain.

"'Okay that's crap and you know it. I have a bunch of parking tickets to prove it.'" (The only line that made me laugh.)

"'You got married?' Amy asks, her face an exquisite mix of disbelief and hurt.

Jake's reached his limit for today, he simply can't take being chewed out by another person, especially not her.

'Yeah, I did. How's Teddy doing, by the way?' he asks, hating himself for it." (Ahhh, stop fighting, you too! D:)

"Rosa's face is a stony mask of disapproval, matching the ones worn by the Captain and the Sergeant. Jake turns to Boyle, who's always had his back and has always been his number one fan. Boyle welcomes him back, but it's half hearted." (I felt so bad for him in this scene; would've loved to see Gina's reaction as well.)

"But he doesn't really possess the will to pry into them, because Amy's transferred to Major Crimes and it is no secret that Jake's the reason." (Just stab me in the face, that'll hurt less than Amy transferring to get away from Jake.)

All in all, extremely raw emotions. As much as I loved the powerful way you wrote this, I'd love to read some more powerfully lighthearted, humorous, fluff. Chapter one was hilarious, and I hope you don't stop writing the carefree banter they have going on, and easygoing-ness. Do you accept prompts? If your writing a new chapter each day, you may eventually get writers block, so it may be nice to have suggestions from readers.
Also, have you considered changing your quotation marks from ' to "? I just feel like it's a better association. Anyway, can't wait to read more from you. Keep up the lovely work! :)

Ok, its a new day. Time for another chapter lol. Im not doing too well waiting for the new season, i need good Jamy fics lol.

This was great! So adorable and so in character. I especially like that this story is already finished and that fact, along with the brilliant writing, ability to keep the characters in character, and your comic genius, makes you my new favourite writer. Well done, I can't wait until tomorrow!