| Reviews for Immunity |
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Jemima88 chapter 14 . 3/5/2019 Very good story. Yugi is an ass in this. Hope you still have more to come. |
ShadowOfSelfDestruction chapter 14 . 1/27/2019 please, i u ever find any time, even a summary, anything, but you have to tell me how it ends! ple-ase, this story is killing me! must. know. loved it |
ccclindemannccc chapter 14 . 3/12/2017 Will u ever continue it? Cuz this is one of the best stories I've ever read! |
PeanutCAT13 chapter 14 . 12/18/2016 I am hooked. Please write more. I really like this story (even if a little more on the graphic side for my taste)! There are some things that do not add up in the story, like the phone call with Yami's lil sis, but I could have easily missed something1. So no worries there. As I have read all of these in the span of a few hours I will say that the writing has improved from the first chapter to the current! I can not wait to see how this all wraps up, and with that I leave my first Review. Goodluck, Peanut I do hope that you are still continuing this project. :) 1.(they do not take away form the story) |
SupremeQueenCosmic chapter 14 . 8/24/2016 So I want to start reading his story but since it's been MONTHS since your last updated well into last year I'm not. But seeing as this isn't totally unusual for you and you're still reliable on not forgetting your stories I might start reading it :D it sounds really interesting. I hope you come back soon and update again :3 |
I'm sorry but no chapter 14 . 7/3/2016 I would give anything for you to continue this story. It's so well written and unlike anything else on this website. Please, I must strongly encourage you to continue writing this, and your other stories, as they masterfully written and planned with wonderful twists and turns in every chapter. |
Bwby.Angwl chapter 14 . 6/22/2016 Please update I want to know what happens next Also I feel like something is wrong with Yugi one minute he was like an asshole the next he was like a little kid that's scared |
kiki2222 chapter 14 . 12/20/2015 Great so far! |
PharaohsThrone chapter 14 . 10/14/2015 kjehrkgjdhskjgehkrtjhgketjyrutsk oh my god oh my god Poor Yami :( BUT WHAT'S HAPPENING TO YUGI I MUST KNOW |
Chaos Twin of Destruction chapter 14 . 10/12/2015 Ah, the sexual content between those two. Can never get enough of that *sighs* Great chapter all together! :D Can't wait to see what else you have up your sleeve next! ;D |
angiembabe chapter 14 . 10/12/2015 What is up with Yugi? Either he is a complete fruit loop or he is possessed by the same person who murdered Yami's mother and is now manipulating Yugi to manipulate those kids into committing murder. Really intense ending, with Yami experiencing a flashback and having a meltdown. Can't wait to see what happens next! |
Ocena Strex chapter 14 . 10/12/2015 Sometimes I wonder how the things you're saying in one sentence fit together XD. Like "But on the bright side, Yugi's an asshole." ... riiiiiiiiiight... moving along. Loved the chapter. Though I always suspected that there was some multiple personality thing going on with Yugi, and this chapter hinted towards that, you also hint that it's not really the case. At first Yugi actually seems like he's just a good actor, but when he was alone with Kaiba I wasn't so sure anymore. Gah! What is up with him? Wanna know, so you'd better get the next chapter up soon ;). |
Hikari-and-Yami chapter 14 . 10/11/2015 Joanne. What. Is. Happening? I am like 99% sure Yugi is under someone's spell/control/influence, and like 1% convinced he just cray cray. Hmm. I don't know. So. Like. Since Yugi's mother died, is it possible that Yugi, when he was younger, was put under control to kill her like all the other kids and her death was just staged it as a suicide, and he's just been under this other influence ever since? Did I already ramble on about this thought in previous reviews? If so, my bad. I'm just trying to figure out what's going on here, and it has my mind spinning. So. Good. Ahhhhh. Btw, nice description of PTSD and flashbacks, very well done. I can't wait for the next chapter, I am so totally in love with this story. ~ Yuri |
Kenta16 chapter 14 . 10/11/2015 I'm very excited to learn what's wrong with yugi. |
angiembabe chapter 13 . 10/10/2015 Poor Yami, what a mess he is in. And that pretty face scarred for life! Yugi is so cruel- or maybe you are for writing it..lol. There is something intriguing about stories in which Yugi is twisted and evil. Were so used to him being Mr. Nice guy. Bad Yugi is so much fun to read. This chapter revealed quite a bit. Looking forward to your next chapter. I wonder what Yugi will have to say. |