This was a wonderful story of acceptance, forgiveness, and love. Thank you for sharing.

Awe, so sweet...

Awe...

Thanks so much for the story.

Edward? Carlisle? Esme?

also I liked the charlie/Leah twist. ignore the grouchy guest, they probably don't have parents 15 years apart. lots of people who don't, get freaked out by age gaps. my parents adore each other though, and they'll never divorce. that's more than I can say for most of the parents of the kids I went to school with.

its a shame you lost your thread after this, but thank you for finishing it well enough for us to know their futures. most people who struggle to finish just... leave it. It wasn't a great ending, but it tied up loose ends, and I really appreciate that. also, saying that, I do like how you started and finished from Alice's POV. that did work very well.
thank you for writing.

Such an awesome story! Also loved how you opened and closed with Alice bringing it full circle.

I really love this story! Amazing! Thank you

Disappointed with this ending. Kinda crap to end on a shit battle

Skipped this whole chapter, not interested in charlie and leah. In fact i find it disgusting

I hate that this chapter made Bella seem shallow. How is she supposed to look deeper into someone if they don’t share themselves with her. She didn’t know Esme or Roses background. And Rose was standoffish towards her, making her not wanting to know her more. And Eddie probably never really explained his side to Bella to maker understand why not, it was all about why he didn’t want her forever but not the why behind it. To explain his life. It was his way or no way.

Amazing work and amazing ending, Im truly surprised.
It doesnt happen often that there is a story about Twilight i like, but yours was Great.
I like your pairing, i think Bella and Jasper are good to each other. And Edward... well I never liked the idea of him and Bella together, i thought she could do better and you prove that. And Jasper deserves people that care for him and understand him.
And sometimes, it is good to have a seer that realize that they sometimes shouldnt rely just on their visions to get things done.

Awwwwww I love that little bit of Alice at the end. How you started and ended it with her. Nicely done!

What the hell? Did they just randomly leave Bella to fend for herself?!