Makes sense.

Grey's Anatomy? Shuashuashuashuashua

This is very nice. The scenario is realistic. Everyone was in character. The dialogue was good.

I quite enjoyed this.

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I like that he has built a new home for himself atop Metro Tower. A very appropriate place for the protector of the city to live. Lisa and Lalli bonding was so sweet! I could just visualize the little girl and opuulu leaving the room together, oblivious to the adults wishing them good night. I'm glad Minion explained about the genders. I, too, was wondering how he could have a cloned daughter. Very nice, non-scary use of cloning here. Usually it's all horror stories. Their decision not to use donor sperm was a good one, as it could have led to a lot more unpleasantness.

lol Dawwww! Sooo cute! Heh, actually Minion's species makes sense. Alot of amphibious and fish species can change gender to suit their needs. Very well done. LOVE IT! _

I liked this one a lot. From what I have read (and don't take this to seriously I've read like four of your stories) you seem to be good at fluff. However, your romance especially in the prequel to this story felt oddly forced. Just a little critique. Have fun writing.

Awesome! I'm looking forward to the changing theme and motives. :D