| Reviews for Power of Aura |
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Csub111 chapter 10 . 8/23/2018 Time to spare? |
PKiscoming chapter 14 . 12/31/2017 When is the next one its been a few years. *Sigh* The longest I've waited for an update was 9 years... only for a cancellation message. |
CBeyzaG chapter 13 . 7/14/2017 Can't remember her name but i love Armin Arlerts VA not so manly but that is just how armin is! (The japanrse va tho) |
CBeyzaG chapter 14 . 5/14/2017 Whoa was that awesome...Nevermind IT WAS PERFECT hahahah all the jokes aside, you are the best!I need your stories i read your books last summer then i kept reading them again and again and again... SO PLEASE WRITE THE NEXT BOOK AS FAST AS YOU CAN!Hahahah okay im calm again if you dont write them fast enough i will probably read the series again :D ok then see ya! |
Guest chapter 14 . 12/23/2016 I totally adore your stories please continue…i'm gonna die if you don't! |
Guest chapter 6 . 10/24/2016 I would just like to say that it's been a few years and a few seasons since this, and the show is still exactly what you described the rebooted season as. There's so many cliches, so many cookie-cutter ideas, the creators being so obviously unoriginal, etc. I honestly like your story of how events happened, and even though I mostly liked what happened in the Stone Army season, I think that if your story had been there instead it would be a lot better |
SergeantSarcasm7 chapter 13 . 8/24/2016 Hi again! I thought about Viviana more, and thought of some things... -she is Hispanic/Spanish/Japanese her more is Spanish/Japanese -her mom was negligent but she had a roof over her head -she lives in Ninjago City, or some other big city of your choosing -she was involved in organized crime, dated one of the leaders, Tamaki "Kuro-Sama" Kurosawa, and when she tried to stand up for herself a little bit, she was left for dead in an alley but managed to survive. (She was mentally abused for a while. When Tamaki hit her for the first time, she wouldn't have any of it and stood up for herself.) You may change whatever you wish :) |
SergeantSarcasm7 chapter 14 . 8/20/2016 It feels like such a long time since I have read your fics... All of your stories are written so beautifully, and I can only hope for more in the future and the best of luck for you! The serpentine story sounds fun! Well, here we go! -Viviana Vargas -ESFJ -manipulative but needs the approval of others. Is unsatisfied with her environment and wants to take control over it. Will blindly accept rules for safety and security. -deep deep down has a love for people, but finds them unsalvageable -has a skewed moral system -energetic but suave. -Italian/Hispanic/Japanese -age 23 -straight, dark brown hair that curves into gentle waves at the ends that flow down to her upper back. Wears hair in a ponytails on rough days. -her eyes are are like dirt and blood mixed together into a dark brown mud. So, it's the kind of brown that has a red tint to it. -her skin is honey beige, but can be darker in the summer -her mother was Italian/Japanese and father was Hispanic. Her mother was young when she was pregnant. Not knowing her father, she was raised in poverty. She mixed into the wrong crowds, leaving her alone, abused, and impoverished. She had an abusive boyfriend she escaped from, but is now homeless. But after this breaking point, she has become determined to change the world around her. -serpentine form: brown-red scales like her eyes, highlighted with Carmel and gold scales. She over all has a dark brown-dark red-Orange-light gold pallet. -skills:manipulative, great with interacting/controlling people. -mate:Skales (optional) Anyway... I'll just leave her here... *pats oc's head* bye-bye! Feel free to take artistic license if you decide to keep her. Have a nice day! :) |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/12/2016 Hey, just thought I would point out to you There's a story called 'definition of a mary-sue' by someone named apocolypse ninja and they mentioned your series in it. you should check it out. |
A.2exis chapter 1 . 5/4/2016 I really love your story's so much and I think there amazing and i don't know if you will ever see this message but I hope your doing ok and will update soon you are one of my favorite author on here and it would really mean a lot when you get a chance if you could message me or I could message you |
edgevanhite12 chapter 14 . 2/23/2016 I loved |
Guest chapter 14 . 2/18/2016 I really hope you update soon. You're one of the only people on here who can portray the ninja accurately. Especially Nya and Zane, I understand how people can portray Zane incorrectly, he's a difficult character but I have trouble understanding how people can portray Nya incorrectly. Anyway, keep up the good work. Everything is amazing and I really can't wait for the next book! |
nanytefa1 chapter 14 . 12/19/2015 Espero que continúes pronto la historia,tengo muchas ganas de saber que paso después,aunque ya me sospecho un par de cosas. Posdata:eres increíble escribiendo,me gustan tus historias. :) |
Aquaflare Twilight chapter 14 . 11/17/2015 Thank you for writing this! I suriously give you SO much credit for my better writingkeep up the good work |
Guest chapter 14 . 10/11/2015 ... Well. That was a very impressive thing. Still processing the last few chapters. You've come a long way from what seemed to be a simple JayxNya shipfic. You've created a fascinating and deep expansion/divergence of the canon universe, Cerberus has made this series much darker, and I love all of the lore, myths, and other supernatural elements in here. Also, now that its basically been blatantly stated Garmadon is the Wayward Soul, there goes my theory about Ebony releasing the Aga to see her mother. The parts with the reincarnations I feel are handled nicely, with the two chosen and their past selves, they are simultaneously one and the same and completely different. I like the contrast between Lloyd and his denial of that aspect of himself vs Dominique's acceptance. I am definitely liking the part where Lloyd manifested his past self, the dragons coming in to heed their lord's call was awesome. Also, few questions: What is with Ayane's wolf spirit thing and calling not Amaterasu mom yet, is that a thing I missed, or will it be explained in Praise Amaterasu? Also, been bugging me since the end of Beyond the flames, I've been picturing the ninja's new outfits as the elemental robes they got from the Temple of Light in the show, would that be correct? Great work, keep it up, have a virtual bag of holding as a gift. |