Nice chapter. Though to tell you if someone knocks into somthing at 'supersonic speeds' they're dead. Furry or not.

I am guessing this is a dead fic since it been years since you last updated this. Thank you for writing and entertaining me so far at least.

I loved this story, great job! You have a lot of potential!

Couldn't get past second chapter HATE when people are mean to Amy, cosmo can rot in space

that little bi-brat! I knew there was something wrong! that mother fu-fudge!

oh come on now he can't talk! you are hurting sonic too much

story time! and knuckles is going to say it for us yay!

this story is too hilarious XD love it

the thought of sonics friends training him like he is a dog is hilarious and disturbing at the same time XD

Muito bem. Achei impressionante. Só espero que chegue logo os próximos capítulos.

Hello Soniclover0028,

While I love the idea for your story and hope you continue (if you ever do) I feel that there's something to be said here: Something I notice while reading your story is that you have a total of 9 nine characters to focus on in this story? Now I know you've far into the story but as a piece criticism, having this many characters to focus on can downgrade the enjoyment of story. I say this with regard to the story that reading the interaction between all of these characters feels tedious (Knuckles, Amy, Cosmo, and Rouge) and several of them don't really feel like they have any relevance to the plot other than to be there and take up space on the chapter. Too many character interactions to focus on all at one time is a bit painful to read and it feels like parts of the chapters digress from the their importance to the plot in situations that are a bit pointless and unnecessary such as Amy trying to drown Sonic. I'm not sure if this was an attempt at humor but it felt more awkward than funny. Your readers obviously love seeing other characters in the Pokemon universe but there are better ways to go about implementing their presence rather than throwing them in in the beginning. And as a pet peeve if you are going to use characters outside of cannon such as Cosmo it would be wise to establish why their there and perhaps mention something at some point about the events that occurred before this adventure otherwise its like, "Why is Cosmo here?" "Didn't she die in Sonic X?" "Whats the point of her being here?". When you don't explain why a more obscure character is in the story you leave people wondering why their there.

Now that I've said that I want you to know that I don't hate your story or your idea to use several characters but I do feel that in the future you should keep this in mind. It's because I like this story that I criticized it and I think that a Sonic that runs on all fours and says his name is adorable as all hell XD. I hope you continue this story one day.

Best Regards Roxa814.

mmmmmm bb

What!? That's it!? I'm gonna get you soniclover!

Lol

Cool!
I love it!
I wish sonic could be back as a Pokemon though
It was cool when he was. Can you have him as a Pokemon again?
Pleeeaaassseee!? . !
Your story is the only one I can find that has sonic as/acting as a pokemon.

Oh and what happened to cream cheese and vanilla?

Hope you update soon! :)