Reviews for The Maelstrom and the Princess Knight
YeagerMeister31 chapter 1 . 1/13/2019
Well this was cool and surprising is Claudette an enemy this is a first although Elina being a total bitch is normal and glad she was sealed away and Annelotte being half demon huh nice and Edgar from Men In Black Huh didn't understand at first until I remembered he said the exact same quote in MIB before his true form was revealed, the lemon was cool but it's weird they called Annelotte big brother when she's a female that was weird, anyways whatever and Minato, Kushina and Mito is a common thing now but Kaguya huh that's new wonder who's next for me to read
Guest chapter 1 . 12/27/2016
UPDATE
Guest chapter 1 . 1/1/2015
If your going to do another story, have Mecha Naruto in it
genesicgaogaigarvsgodgundam chapter 1 . 10/23/2014
nice
SonicFan12 chapter 1 . 4/14/2014
3some between Luna-Luna, Naruto, and Annelotte?
REVANOFSITHLORD chapter 1 . 4/12/2014
love it
guest chapter 1 . 3/30/2014
A batman beyond reference I could just hug you.
Mark Whitley chapter 1 . 3/28/2014
You put down Naruto/Sara twice in your favorite pairings bio. But still good story
sketchfan chapter 1 . 3/24/2014
epic ad hot
bankai777 chapter 1 . 3/24/2014
i bet that Kaguya will be strong just like her parents.
Snake King chapter 1 . 3/24/2014
When your next 1 coming?
DarkChild316 chapter 1 . 3/24/2014
Sensei, you honestly just keep on impressing me with you're mastery of lemon writing.
Not only did I get to see Naruto kick some ass with the Gold and Silver brothers, Edgar the Cockroach and the sexy Annelotte Kreuz, but I also got to see that bitch Elina get what she deserved. Although I have to admit I really wish you could have left her in Edgar's stomach and have him just...well you know what I mean.
I also have to say that the sex scene was just a spicy as ever. And the part where Annelotte and Naruto went full-blown beast mode and went at it like two wild demon's in heat was just priceless (maybe as priceless as her sister-in-arms reaction to seeing Naruto naked with Annelotte).
Once again, job well done and can't wait for the lemon with Luna-Luna.

You're Student,
DarkChild316!
Pyromania101 chapter 1 . 3/23/2014
Wow, pretty good lemon. Could've gone without Edgar, though. Oh well.