Your use of of for off and wait for weight. Of like in order of. Off like to turn off. Wait as in time or waiting for. Weight as in pound or pressure.

Ah can’t wait for the next chapter

Finally. Update more fequetly. I'm still waiting for Tia n the princess to be fuck into ninerva.

Well, glad to see you back.

If I can suggest a roster with the names of the characters and their relationships. I confess I no longer know who's who outside of the main characters.

WOOOHOOO THE LEGEND IS BACK!

Been awhile. Welcome back.

omg thank you for the update. i honestly thought you got hit by a car or something. that this story would sit and rot. i am so happy you are back and hope you continue to update

I have to reread this... it's been a while. thanks for the update

So I'm confused is Jake on the team or is Seth since Seth is in the team roster but Jake is in the mission.

please come back. I loved this story and wish for it to continue

R u going to update soon.

I think we need a new character, I suggest putting me into the story as a friend. My digimon oc is a half pokemon: lucario and half Chaosgallantmon. Name: Kadyn, Nickname Eclipse. Personality: Laid-back/cool.
Gender: male
You can come up with the rest because I can't describe it well. That would be ok with me.
Oh shit I forgot! great story so far and I think you need to get it proofread and spell checked.

Thanks!
Eclipse

P.S. This review was made on a Nintendo 3ds original model.
also my hands freaking hurt!
No stylus at all

Damn Emerald you lucky basterd

After chapter 4 it got better,reading it didn't hurt my soul as much as it did before, but now you have dialogue from different people in the same paragraph. Reading that hurts almost as much as the poor grammar from before.

Mate ?!
Dropped