Reviews for The Lover That Went Wrong
pixinightingal chapter 1 . 12/3/2017
That was great one..i hope there was more shown with loki and his little son..
Guest chapter 7 . 1/29/2017
Silly but funny enough to be entertaining.
tikalyn chapter 12 . 7/28/2016
need more ahhhhhhhh
Black Fox34 chapter 12 . 7/29/2015
I Loved Reading The Lover That Went Wrong. And I am delighted to say that I love how it ended. Keep up the good work.
dude. cx chapter 1 . 7/3/2015
Chapter 7 or 8 I forgot which omg too mush I give XD
Guest chapter 1 . 2/16/2015
You are just SUCH a good writer, I can't get over it! Wonderful job! I was looking for Keep your Heart Close to the Ground but it seems that's deleted? Either way, I meant to review it and say I LOVED it.
Inuhime1 chapter 12 . 9/3/2014
12 chapters in one sitting. OMG that was beautiful. Greatest ending ever, and I will tell you i have never been sooo surprised in a story ever, But i'm sooo glad little Fredrik was alive that whole time. Awwwwww. Very good story.
Guest chapter 12 . 8/22/2014
This story deserves many more reviews. The central tragic happening in this story happened for real in my family so that chapter was especially emotional for me. Thankfully this had a happier ending. £££
miagirl2012 chapter 12 . 5/25/2014
Really good read:-)
doodsduck chapter 12 . 5/21/2014
Beautiful. Thank you.
Intoxic chapter 12 . 5/19/2014
I'm happy that everything ended alright for them and that Loki is back with Tony and Fredric. It was a beautiful end.
It was an amazing story. Thank you for it.
Potkanka chapter 12 . 5/18/2014
Ah, everything ended on either good or at least hopeful note, there were certainly moments in this story that didn't hint towards that. Even S.H.I.E.L.D. somehow survived this, wow. And Tony will try to be a responsible dad, or at least try to... And I wonder if they'll still need the nanny now that Loki's here - or more like if Loki will allow a stranger to touch their son.
I was hoping we'd get a glimpse on how it went in Asgard but at least we know it was nice, even if Loki wouldn't admit it.
And Tony and Steve might even be friends again one day.
Also Amora won't hopefully annoy them anytime soon again.
And Fredric is adorable and everybody loves him and will protect him, yay, happy end!

Haha, no really, I loved this story. There were dark and hurtful parts but I enjoy them as long as I know all will be well in the end so this was great. Thank you for sharing the story with us. :)
Guest chapter 12 . 5/18/2014
YES YES YES YES!
I love the ending :'D Thanks so much for writing this awesome story!
LadyLorena chapter 12 . 5/17/2014
Well this is justmamgorgeous story. I'm just starting to read Tony/Loki five, in part because it is hard to find ones that do well with the two very difficult personalities. I really like how you used them here and the twist with their son was very well written, though some of your author's notes did hint that it was coming. The Enchantress storyline was ve y nicely woven into your plot as well. Good work!
Lady Frost the warrior chapter 12 . 5/16/2014
FUCK YEAH AND EVERYBODY LIVED HAPPILY EVER AFTER
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