| Reviews for In A Grimm Manor |
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   Lloyd RPGFan chapter 11 . 8/1/2018 Okay, seriously, Spade and Cardin being the same person makes no freaking sense. Bianca (more like her ghost) herself has been stuck in this manor for more than 17 years. How did Cardin find the place ? What's that weird armor he's wearing ? Where did he find it ? |
| Stripesicles222 chapter 12 . 4/16/2017 I really liked this story. And Jaune has a semblance! Guess I'll go find the sequel. |
| JustAFool chapter 12 . 8/11/2016 Good story. |
| 2 lazy to log in chapter 13 . 5/1/2016 I can't remember my password so yeah I'm not logged in but OMFG THIS WAS LIKE AMAZING YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW HOW FREAKING MUCH I LOVE THIS THE SECOND I REMEMBER IM FAVORITING THIS ASAP OH MY GOD IT WAS GOOD |
| winddemon199 chapter 11 . 10/24/2015 Yay Cardin |
| winddemon199 chapter 8 . 10/24/2015 Holy shit dude |
| The Old Bastard chapter 2 . 6/12/2015 Damn, Ozpin. You crafty, nigga. |
| dracohalo117 chapter 6 . 3/20/2015 So, it seems Weiss or her company has a connection to this place. dracohalo117 |
| dracohalo117 chapter 5 . 3/20/2015 Oh Lizz, I pity you... dracohalo117 |
| dracohalo117 chapter 3 . 3/20/2015 Daaawwwwww...and I think Yang just tempted fate here... dracohalo117 |
| dracohalo117 chapter 2 . 3/20/2015 Oh Ozpin... dracohalo117 |
| dracohalo117 chapter 1 . 3/20/2015 Oh Jaune you done fudged up... dracohalo117 |
| l3largus chapter 13 . 1/23/2015 I'm happy to here there's going to a sequel. You have an excellent writing style. You did a great job with keeping everyone in character along with having Weiss and Jaune grow (there's a word for it that's on the tip of my tongue) and the main story itself gave me a Resident Evil kind of feel. Alice was a very interesting Grimm and her backstory was very nice. I also loved the ominous mist. She definitely gave off something like a final boss feel. You also did a great job defying my expectations. I had assumed this was going to be another "person A messes up, becoming person B's slave till they fall in love," so I had avoided this. But to my pleasant surprise it wasn't. Another thing was at the end with Cardin. I was expecting him to either reveal himself to Jaune or him to be more either upset or angered with the loss of Bianca (nice name btw) but his dialogue at the end add a lot more depth to him then I ever thought anyone cared (the shows creators included.) So kudos for making a throwaway character interesting. I also want to additional props for Weiss x Jaune friendship & those Arkos moments that don't distract from the story. Tl;Dr: Great story. XD |
| l3largus chapter 12 . 1/23/2015 "Rolling around at the speed of sound." First, Pyrrha how did you get that? Second, is it bad that I sang along? XD |
| l3largus chapter 5 . 1/23/2015 Ruby: "Than one, two, four!-" Me: facepalm. I like your intermissions. They are very nice reads and fit well not only into your world but also into the canon world. |
