Not really my favorite couple
But the fic is still very good, love how you work every relationship

You're a great writer, technically speaking, but the content leaves a lot to be desired. Try a completely not believable pair.

Abe

wow! i was just skimming down and you have written all those TOby/Cj stories-and then this one! Donna Toby? well i laughed alot. outrageous idea!

lol.

I really enjoyed this! Though I'm an avid Josh/Donna shipper I love to stray from the original from time-to-time. This was well written, humorous, witty and sweet all in one. Great job!