Meh

Your story is so beautiful! For one thing, you managed to add wlw. It also had a wonderful plot and it showed real war that wasn't just all black and white. You are a really wonderful author, you made me feel many emotions while reading this. 10/10 definitely

Really great story. I enjoyed how you portrayed characters and situations. It seemed much more realistic than what most fanfic rebellion stories go through. I always love a good story with an author willing to kill main characters. When a lot of unknown characters popped up, I worried those would be the only ones being casualties, but I'm glad I was wrong. It is highly unlikely everyone would have made it except background characters. Well done.

I loved the names you added from other fandoms, I thought that was a nice touch.

If we're being technical, Tonks is a triple agent. The Ministry, the Order, and the Wolverines.

Do you read Warrior Cats?

(Before there is peace, blood will spill blod and the lake will run red)

I realize this isn’t likely, but if regulus is actually Natalie’s Dad and started a new life under a fake name, how hilarious would that be?

Sirius: out of ALL the people of our family you’re the least likely to have a bastard child, so how is it that you ended up with one?

Regulus: don’t be absurd, I didn’t have a bastard child with some woman

Sirius: yeah well the maths don’t lie

Regulus: we are married

Sirius: ...

Hermione: so this will be good for a temporary base while we’re in Hogwarts but once we’re done, we’ll need somewhere to base our operations, which if all goes to plan, will be much larger

Harry: I’m sure the Potter family has a few castles we could pick from

Ginny: n i c e

frickin awesome

I am NOT going to cry over the image of Flora and Ginny living so close to Hestia and Blase they can exchange children freely. I am not going to cry over Sirius having lived to have children. I will not-

Okay so first of all, I want to appreciate the Death Eater's reaction when faced with a motherfucking tank.

Standing in the line of fire
Moving on through the fray
Coming over trench and wire
Live to fight another day
-The Future of Warfare (Sabaton)

Now I can cry for the fallen and for the girls who lost their souls to the war. No other way than forward.

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Megan's been losing it for a while. They all are going to need therapy some months ago, hopefully someone will suggest it. So… with Fudge dead I guess Amelia Bones for a ministress?

AAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaAAAAAAAaAaAaAaAaAaAaAaAaAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa GINNY AND FLORA 333333 and Tonks! Yay! A minute of silence for the deceased ones now that I stopped screaming about the good things.

Morgan's lucky she didn't blow herself up as well. And hopefully they didn't forget anyone innocent either.