WORDS CANNOT DESCRIBE HOW MUCH I LOVED THIS I STAYED UP TILL 3:17AM READING IT I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU YOUR WRITING IS AMAZING

they way you described pitch's tantrum is hilarious! it is a good way to end the fic ~ wouldn't mind reading more though .

LOL , when the lovers scar their friends with this , (Gasping for breath from laughing!) it's just the funniest! thank you doing that. i haven't been able to laugh this much since i read " the forgotten Doe"
will North wind up burning the couch they did it on?

oh so now we're suspicious of Jack?

i enjoy storys like this , i've only seen one other but i love it. snowflake gets a hoootttttt boyfriend.

and you turned him into a human... going to have Jack teach him?

they tried friendship and their friends see old long love between them

and now the courtship?

oh yea! well not yea for the fact he's sad but this is different

and here comes the roasting , Bunny dislikes Jack Frost because he's so much like his Jack and Frost is a winter spirit. and then he'll feel bad because he was hurting his beloved Jack and then the forgiveness salve. hopefully this will be a bit different from the typical story that

that was such an abrupt ending/wrap up

So was bunny changed back or not? Great story btw

Great story but definitely want another chapter

I have a suggestion. The story is a bit difficult to read, not so much the grammar, as the sentence structure. A good beta would be able to help out quite a bit with that, and any other issues you might be having with writing the story.

I love this story I think it is now one of my favorites!