This had me smiling- I find this story a great way to revisit how their relationships unfolded. Good stuff.

nice...reading this while listening to the soundtrack of Exodus. who'd a thought they would go together so well.

This is a wonderful short. I very much enjoyed reading it. I love how you described Kahn. It all just made sense.
Is there anyway I can convince you to continue the story? I believe it would be a grand adventure.

Aww...I like this little filler kind of thing. When this story first came out I thought it was a sequel, and I almost didn't read it cuz the way you had ended things before was perfect. The ending to this was adorable, and I can totally see their relationship actually happening. Anyway, nice to see you again, and happy writing!

Hehe. thanks for writing something with a happy ending. I'm still sorta mad about that last one… Rousdower out

I am sooo glad to see you adding another story to this series...it is by far one of the best ones ( imo) written in this fandom. I had wondered if we would ever find out what happened between Khan picking her up in the shuttle and her later visit with Christine and Uhura. Thank you for writing this and sharing it with the rest of us.

I'm so glad that you decided to post this story :)

Excellent work as usual. I liked how Carol wanted to take things slow, and that Khan was willing to wait for her.