I love this! Lillie sounds cool and not like other OC's and thats awesome, because usually OC's are too perfect or emo or something, that spells annoying to me! lol! so anyway, what I am saying is that you did an amazing job portraying your OC and I would like to read more of your story because I like it!
So! Update soon!
P.S. Cool hand Luke is AWESOME! :D

Update soon. I love the way Pony was acting with the girl. Hope for more soon.

This was awesome, but all that work and barely a Junior in highschool? I would expect a Senior but not a Junior!

The cooking scenario was so funny with the boys running out with the pan.

Interesting read so far.

Oooh! So out of character for Pony, yet very believable! I love it so much! Please do not take a year to update again, I can not wait for more!

Thiis was so good! I love how descriptive your writing style is already!

Excellent writing so far. I enjoy seeing such an underrated character being acknowledged. Try not to have him slur or stutter his words so much though. If he had drank that much, I'm sure he would have been passed out on the floor.