| Reviews for Mark Your Calendar |
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Guest chapter 8 . 9/1/2017 What about the wedding? |
Lego Nerd Guy chapter 2 . 9/4/2016 I read the whole thing til the end. No lie. Like seriously |
Alice Forshadow chapter 8 . 7/17/2016 Awww... ;) So cute... |
Gamerwhogames chapter 1 . 6/21/2016 Oooo. It's not the girl. It's THE girl. |
AnnaTwil Spark chapter 3 . 2/27/2016 Awesome, I'm huge fan of The LEGO Movie and that's really great FanFic! |
Anne Onymus chapter 4 . 7/24/2015 "The black-haired Lego girl continued to walk up and down the street aimlessly for no reason at all." Ya know what? I'm suspicious. And it DOESN'T bode well that their whole plan depends on her being capable of telepathy. "Oh yeah, perhaps I should have walked across the street with my eyes open." PSHFT. (That is what my laugh sounds like IRL, in case you're wondering why that ugly collection of letters should be there.) Also, I think you could make this (even) funnier by taking out the line: "forgetting it's generally not a good idea to cross the street with your eyes closed", because it would make *this* line more unexpected. "Even Bad Cop didn't have anything to snap or mouth off at him." OOOOOOOHHH, heh heh . . . INN-TERESTINGG. "Why does everyone use that corny joke?" Poor guy, he must a been spending too much time with supervillains. And Loki being a moron (or at least way behind the times when it comes to news on the Special) is hilarious. I haven't seen the Avengers movies, but I already dislike Loki because almost everything I've heard of him was said by girls obsessed with him, so it's FUN you treating him a bit less worshipfully. :D Also . . . "tower" isn't spelled "tour". That was just slightly distracting sometimes. Oh, and cool that you have eight siblings! I only have five. |
Anne Onymus chapter 3 . 7/24/2015 "You're trying to get rid of me just because I tried to kill you twice! What does a guy have to do around here to get forgiven?" *best line in this fic so far, probably* "I don't think Bad Cop is capable of feelings." HEY. Good Cop. You're him half the time, surely you'd have noticed he does? He was reluctant to be killed by Lord Business even as Bad Cop, and even Bad Cop refused at first to Kragle his mom and dad! And besides, rage is technically a feeling. ;) Oh, and what I meant by Good Cop being a wimp in the movie is that he mostly serves as a set-up for cruel jokes by Bad Cop. "Would you like a glass of water?" "TOO BAD." "I believe you!" "I 'believe' you too!" And the worst worst WORST part: "Don't worry, you won't die, you'll be fine." Because it's a PATENTLY heroic action to lie to people just so they'll feel slightly better in the five seconds before you kill them. But here I remember at some point in the last chapter Bad Cop threatening to break his face or something along those lines, and Good Cop smiling and not being in the least intimidated. Which means he's not in the service of his bad self anymore. Which YAY. |
Anne Onymus chapter 2 . 7/23/2015 Read this immediately after your first story, want to read more than these two chapters but can't now, will say it's awesome. Also, you made Good Cop more /good/ and less of a wimp than he seemed in the movie, which I like. I guess he's improved by not having to work for someone who wants to glue the world together. |
Blueaiden2004 chapter 8 . 8/26/2014 This is great! |
BlueJay026 chapter 8 . 5/30/2014 I loved reading this story; it was awesome! I loved how you wrote Good Cop and Bad Cop interacting with each other. You're great with writing their personalities! Oh, and in the end, I really loved how it was Bad Cop that saved Eli. It showed that he liked her just like Good Cop did, without him having to say so with words. Great job! I was intrigued all the way through; I didn't want to stop reading! Keep writing stories and God bless you, too! |
stupidfinewriterchick chapter 8 . 5/18/2014 This. Was. Absolute. PERFECTION. Seriously, this has just become my favorite Lego Movie fanfiction ever. I love how you kept it to the Playing Child style. Oh my gosh it was beautiful. GCBC are such perfect little darlings. I honestly can't begin to tell you how much I loved reading this. Thank you so much for writing it! Amazing, amazing job! |
Ike11 chapter 1 . 4/25/2014 So awesome! |
Yoyo chapter 8 . 4/17/2014 Haven't read such a great story in a while! Well done! |
DaydreamingDuma chapter 8 . 4/11/2014 Perfect! A round of applause for this story! *applaudes* |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/10/2014 Please don't end it so soon! |