Okay...what the hell was that? Never mind whatever...come back soon Miss aussie okay?

Can't wait for the following chapter :)
"Suck and blow"? Awesome! Thank you for your hard work

You know i just had a thought reading this. I thought about what would happen if I was in this situation. Where a person I knew was getting cheated on. Then I realized I wouldn't be able to know because it never happened before. P.s. I sooooo knew that grimm was gonna catch the card with his teeth! P.s.s loves the story ️️️️

AHHHHHHHH!
Un-discontinue it (if that's a word) PLEAASSSEEEEEE...
It was just getting good :(
I need closure. Haha, but great chapter by the way. Thumbs up guys, hope you two get back on it.

Oooh la la at Grimm's naughty dreaming...shaking of head at Ichigo's...erm overaction. LOL at Ulquiorra being Ulquiorra. 'Tis a shame your partner in crime bailed on you...this fic has lots o' potential and I wanna see what happens next.

When I read the first chapter I already knew that Shiro was gunna be a asshole on this. Well the bright side is that there won't be a sad Shiro like the rest of those stories that I read before. It will be different and new!
Well at least I think so? Anyways awesome story! Love the plot already!

Poor Ichigo is in denial. Shiro's an ass and I hope he pays the price. Grimmjow is too nice to be in character here. That punch is so uncalled for but it's understandable from Ichigo's point of view. Please update soon.

WRITE MORREE PLEASEEE ITS GREATT I NEED MOORE TTvTT

This was really good. Very fun too, makes me wanna keep reading more and more.

I feel like shiro was a little possessive of ichi, maybe? trying to show grimm? maybe he even saw something in grimm's eyes when he gazed upon ichi-baby?
or perhaps it's just his personality and he always attacks ichi regardless of whose there. But something makes me suspect he's being a sneaky bastard here haha.
I don't want to assume too much about shiro too early.
But I did felt kind of a nasty taste or something when I realized it was shiro coming on to grimm. He feels a little wild, out of control? I dunno. Really, I don't wanna assume, but kinda want to kick his ass.
I guess he's gonna be the kind of character we'll love to hate? or not. I dunno!

Ichi does seem to blush a lot, considering they've been together for so long, I find that a bit weird but we didn't get that much back story yet so it's plausible. maybe he's just naturally very blushy hahah, though he didn't blush once with grimm. Grimm wasn't too blush inducing though. xD I can't wait for him to get sneaky. :DDD
I like ichi better with grimm, he feels more in charge, more confident and it's nice to see him like that. n_n
grimm being younger is a bit surprising, but it's not unwelcome. I love reading grimmichi over and over again with all the little differences after all. :)

btw shiro was described very thoroughly but nothing was said of ichi's hair! of all things! what is this calamity? ichi's hair not being mentioned at all! hahah it's a bleach fic apocalypse! haha
Can you possibly make it long too? Maybe not as long as shiro but I dunno, slightly? A little long? :D It's ok if you don't think it matches his style/personality though.
Just a silly request cause it wasn't mentioned and felt the opportunity to attck with long haired ichi images. I have a thing for long haired-ichi *drools*.

I don't know how you didn't notice, but you guys spelt college correctly all through the fic but incorrectly in the summary.
so, uhm, good job!
you're twice the manpower xD so I hope there'll be an update soon?
or maybe it actually takes longer if there's more than one author? D:
anyways, good luck and I'll be expecting more of this. n_n

Not quite what I was expecting but entertaining all the same. Nevertheless I'm totally gonna be rooting for Grimmjow

...WOW...Such an great first chapter! Can't wait to read more!

Shiro seems like an unfaithful boyfriend while Ichigo seems so timid and faithful to Shiro. I can't see how Ichigo will be swayed by Grimmjow here.

Ahhhh! I just love ur stories! Lookin forward to the next chapter!

Awww i liked this, and what will happen when ichi knew that shiro is a prick! will grimm step in the scene? LOL ... waiting for the next chappy !