This story was absolutely heart warming

I get that this is your story and you can do whatever you want but the fact that Bella is defending Alice and Edward is deplorable. Its disrespectful to Jacob and the pain he suffered. Its contradictory to the idea that Jacob and Bella's imprinting is special and stronger than a normal imprint. Bella is essentially showing here that her feelings for Jacob aren't very strong. Imprints are sacred to the Quiluet tribe and interfering with one goes beyond any treaty. The safety of the wolf imprints is the highest duty and responsibility of the tribe so its unrealistic that Sam would allow the Cullen's to get away with kidnapping a member of their tribe without any 'real' consequences. At this point in the story, due to the way that Bella is treating Jacob, I don't believe Bella is deserving of Jacob's love and feelings. Its also very unrealistic that Charlie as the chief of police doesn't arrest Edward for what he has done. At this point, while I hate dropping stories in the middle, I already know that I will not get any further enjoyment from reading further. My bit of constructive criticism would be to keep consistent in your story. If your going to show a strong connection between Jacob and Bella then do so but don't flip flop from weak to strong emotions for the sake of drama. Showing Bella as a strong female who is secure in the feelings that she has for Jacob would have presented the same opportunities for drama and would have prevented Bella from being such an unlikeable character.

Wow...I nearly dropped the story immediately after reading this sentence: 'I trust you both one hundred percent, and the same goes for Jacob.' Bella here is an idiot, I don't care how much she cared for Edward in the past. The fact that both Alice and Edward kidnapped and drugged her should have made her lose any trust she had in these two. Especially after everything she's had to suffer through in the last year. I don't get how she can empathize for them at all. Also, Jasper is a powerful empath yet there has been no reference to him feeling the anguish that Bella or Jacob are going through.

I want to smack Bella in this chapter. She's knowingly causing Jacob intense pain by going to the Cullen's house. The underhanded methods that Alice used should have been a major red flag. It was obvious that Edward was going to do something underhanded.

Everything is pretty great in this chapter but Alice shouldn't be able to see a vision if the wolves are part of it.

Loved it! I’m looking for a sequel!

Thanks for the great story!

Good cliffy!

A couple things I want to mention. 1) I love the story and I’m loving the plot and everything. 2) However much I love it, there are some grammatical errors, some tense inconsistencies, and minor spelling mistakes. 3) I’m not sure if you know this, but as far as I’m aware the wolves can only communicate telepathically when they’re in wolf form.

Thanks for sharing your writing.

Every time a character (from Washington State mind you) says the word “whilst“, everyone in the story seems to take on a fake Irish accent. Now,, there is nothing wrong with an Irish accent, but people born and raised in the US generally don’t have one... This story needs a bit of language editing. For the most part readable and entertaining.

What a Great Story...Going back and reading again from the start..Thanks

Fantastic chapter! This was an amazing story! I am so happy Jake relented to having a baby with Bella! Carlisle was right Bella is strong! I loved it and I'm a little sorry it's ending. I hope you decide to write more in the future! Loved it! Great job!

hope that i could read more of your stories.

I enjoy the story so faran edit that needs to be made though, is that there is no ocean view in Colorado. Colorado is inland, so maybe a lake but no ocean.
there are some other things you say that make me realize you are not American, and the story is told from an American perspective, but I enjoy learning new terms for everyday things so it doesn't personally bother me on the least.
I can't believe you've had harsh and unconstructive reviews, your story is very good. Please don't let jerks get to you