Oh man, this was PERFECT. I love what you did with Aerugo and the host family-the photo was such a cute detail, and your dialogue is great.

I'm reviewing on the wrong chapter and also this was written six years ago, but it's just extremely well-done. And it's nice to read something where Winry's actually going after what she wants. This all felt very authentic to her as a character. And that line about Ed looking nonchalant? Friggin perfect.

Omg! I just re watched FMAB on Netflix and I had this urge to look for fanfics because the ending of just the picture wasn't enough for me hahaha Your story is so in character it actually feels like this is the way it went. They are both beginners in all of this and you explained perfectly, not that super good at sex thing other do when they haven't even kiss anybody lol Well thanks for the story and hopefully you write more.

This is so in character. I really like how you write it up!

Please update soon! I'm really enthralled!

Update soon please

Please, please update soon!

Write more soon.

Update soon please!

Please please continue!

More please. NOW!

Don't leave the reader hanging! Post more, much more.

Very true to their characters!
Keep up the good work!

So neat! I loved Ed's description of catching the shark and the food, sounds true to him.