Great story.

This was great! You're a wonderful writer and I thought you portrayed these two honestly and sweetly. Looking forward to reading more!

That was rather sweet and lovely. I like how the depth and warmth of their friendship comes through.

Wonderful. Thank you for sharing.

This is a very realistic take on how Harry and Hermione could have got together. Pristine writing and natural sounding dialogue. Well done!

Pretty good! It feels like Harry and Hermione. And when Hermione speaks of Ginny and Ron, it feels like their characters there too.

Well done with this. Entertaining and in character. A fun read.

I like this story so much.

The parts about Harry and Hermione are good - as they they realize something that's always there.

I also like how Ginny and Ron actually really care for Harry and Hermione in this story.

I think you should consider writing a sequel.

Charming and romantic. A bit of humor mixed in as well. Loved it. Well done.

If you intended this as a one-time short story, I would reconsider. It has the potential of a longer piece. You could develop the changing relationships of all the couples. I would certainly read it.

well that was cute.